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Poetic Form: Monorhyme

Inspired: 2023 November 14

*2nd Place*
Mother, Magical, Moment Words
Contest Judged: 2023 November 15
Sponsored by: Constance La France

Image: N/A

"If a clown don't make you laugh, that's because you're an adult from Mars," ... by The Poet 'Tis magical youth-phemism plays its part, and subtle measures of bliss-phemism chart, a suite chambered core harmonized whose heart, discovers a treasured keepsake impart, photogenic instants a kid's jump start, when purposed failure is a work of art, amidst submerging laughter comes apart, until the clown blasts, "Kids you're a sweetheart!"

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/16/2023 12:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win. What a creative write. Your quote made me laugh. Thanks... So true. They are from Mars. Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/16/2023 2:02:00 PM

Lol, Paula, now you made me laugh because I had to go back for a look-see being that I forgot the quote, sigh. Appreciate your shared visit, blessings always. Aloha, William

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2023 1:22:00 PM

Creative lines penned in this one. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing. Keep on writing. Sara K

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/15/2023 2:02:00 PM

It was an 11th hour entry being #35 in Constance's contest, Sara. Twas a late bloomer, yet I appreciate your take and more, my friend. Aloha, William

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/14/2023 7:16:00 PM

Love: when purposed failure is a work of art

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/14/2023 7:21:00 PM

'Tis no laughing matter, Kim, "You're a sweetheart"--still got that hat. Aloha, William