Notes About The Poem

Poetic Form: Monorhyme

Inspired: 2023 November 14

 

*2nd Place*
Mother, Magical, Moment Words
Contest Judged: 2023 November 15
Sponsored by: Constance La France

 

Image: N/A

Magical

"If a clown don't make you laugh, that's because you're an adult from Mars," ... by The Poet 'Tis magical youth-phemism plays its part, and subtle measures of bliss-phemism chart, a suite chambered core harmonized whose heart, discovers a treasured keepsake impart, photogenic instants a kid's jump start, when purposed failure is a work of art, amidst submerging laughter comes apart, until the clown blasts, "Kids you're a sweetheart!"
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Goldsmith Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 12:54 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. What a creative write. Your quote made me laugh. Thanks... So true. They are from Mars. Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 2:02 PM
Lol, Paula, now you made me laugh because I had to go back for a look-see being that I forgot the quote, sigh. Appreciate your shared visit, blessings always. Aloha, William
Kendrick Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 1:22 PM
Creative lines penned in this one. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing. Keep on writing. Sara K
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 2:02 PM
It was an 11th hour entry being #35 in Constance's contest, Sara. Twas a late bloomer, yet I appreciate your take and more, my friend. Aloha, William
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 7:16 PM
Love: when purposed failure is a work of art
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 7:21 PM
'Tis no laughing matter, Kim, "You're a sweetheart"--still got that hat. Aloha, William
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