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Magic Water

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Poetry/Verse/magic water
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1561-773-14
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, July 14, 2023
For the International Contest, Bite Size No. 68
Sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 08/11/2023

Honorable Mention

The Poetry of Exile—James Joyce, Rumi & Adrian Rice — Steemit 

 
today was so hot
and my flowers are wilted now
I rush quickly for the watering can
pouring cool water over each  
and like magic they raise their heads

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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/12/2023 2:50:00 AM
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Giving life - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/12/2023 9:43:00 AM
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Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings !
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Stephan McBride
Date: 7/15/2023 8:11:00 AM
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Beautiful picture of truth , I once was that flower wilted , consumed from worldly beliefs with head down, then the magic water was poured unto me : ) to spring up this new life within, love your poem
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Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 8:29:00 AM
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Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment, and lovely comment !
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/14/2023 4:56:00 PM
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Surprisingly a cool drink a blessing, nicely done.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 8:29:00 AM
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Eve, thank you so much for the comment and compliment !
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The Situation
Date: 7/14/2023 4:40:00 PM
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You must be near by. Never in my life 120 degrees. I refuse to write about it and I'll leave it all to you.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 8:31:00 AM
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Situation, Canada has been extremely hot this summer, so uncomfortable and nothing we can do about it !
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/14/2023 4:59:00 PM
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Wow that is hot. I live in Texas and it does get that hot. It’s 93 right now, but a cool breeze under my tree

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