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Copyright Protected, ID 07-1561-773-14
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, July 14, 2023
For the International Contest, Bite Size No. 68
Sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 08/11/2023

Honorable Mention

The Poetry of Exile—James Joyce, Rumi & Adrian Rice — Steemit

Magic Water

 today was so hot
and my flowers are wilted now
I rush quickly for the watering can
pouring cool water over each  
and like magic they raise their heads

flowerwaterverse

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Christuraj Alex

August 12, 2023 at 2:50 AM

Giving life - Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Constance La France

August 12, 2023 at 9:43 AM

Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings !

Stephan McBride

July 15, 2023 at 8:11 AM

Beautiful picture of truth , I once was that flower wilted , consumed from worldly beliefs with head down, then the magic water was poured unto me : ) to spring up this new life within, love your poem

Constance La France

July 16, 2023 at 8:29 AM

Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment, and lovely comment !