Magic Touch

If I lie bleeding,
place your tenderness on it....
only you heal me.


For "sensuous senryus" sponsored by Francine Roberts.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/26/2011 8:31:00 PM

Emotional, tender lines worthy of your win. Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2011 8:37:00 PM

congratulations, George. Truly a sensuous senryu!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 7/3/2011 5:44:00 AM

Tender write and great win George. Congratulations to you

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/30/2011 4:33:00 PM

very nice! george! jimbo

Wandering Butterfly

Date: 6/30/2011 12:37:00 PM

deserving senryu of this 1st place honor...congrats ~Randa

Emma Mantle

Date: 6/30/2011 3:37:00 AM

Belated congrats on your win George. This is a stunning piece. Best wishes Em :)

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 6/28/2011 6:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your first placement in Francine's contest. Indeed a sensuous write. :))

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2011 2:40:00 AM

Simply beautiful, George. So happy to see you taking first place in Francine's contest. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/27/2011 8:59:00 PM

Congrats on your success in the contest...well done. BG

Date: 6/27/2011 2:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Francine's contest, lovely words written. Alexa

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/27/2011 1:47:00 PM

lovely thought two beautiful sentences. Congrad's Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/27/2011 1:22:00 PM

Congrats George on your first place win with this spectacular senryu my friend.. perfect words ..luv..

Sharon Well

Date: 6/27/2011 1:20:00 PM

lovely expression! congrats on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 11:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sensuous Senryu's" contest George. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/27/2011 11:48:00 AM

My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, george

Russell Smith

Date: 6/27/2011 11:35:00 AM

congrats on you first place win

Shannon Deane

Date: 6/27/2011 10:40:00 AM

Congrats on your first place win in Francine's contest

Treasa Jarvis

Date: 6/27/2011 10:37:00 AM

Beautiful.Congrats on the first place , God Bless:)

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/27/2011 10:25:00 AM

Wow George, I absolutely love this.. Congratulations on your first place win ;)

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/27/2011 10:01:00 AM

Congratulations George on your first place win with this tender write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/27/2011 10:00:00 AM

this is THE most romantic entry of all 35 , congrats on your first place win in my contest George

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/25/2011 6:37:00 PM

Lovely expressions , george

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/25/2011 9:04:00 AM

Very nice Senryu!!!! winning wishes for you...Michael

Kash Poet

Date: 6/25/2011 8:53:00 AM

Sensuously beautiful!Best wishes.

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