Magic Touch

If I lie bleeding,
place your tenderness on it....
only you heal me.


For "sensuous senryus" sponsored by Francine Roberts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 8:31 PM
Emotional, tender lines worthy of your win. Congratulations.
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 8:37 PM
congratulations, George. Truly a sensuous senryu!
Dufresne Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 5:44 AM
Tender write and great win George. Congratulations to you
Goff Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 4:33 PM
very nice! george! jimbo
Butterfly Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 12:37 PM
deserving senryu of this 1st place honor...congrats ~Randa
Mantle Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 3:37 AM
Belated congrats on your win George. This is a stunning piece. Best wishes Em :)
Hendricks Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 6:48 AM
Congratulations on your first placement in Francine's contest. Indeed a sensuous write. :))
Devonshire Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 2:40 AM
Simply beautiful, George. So happy to see you taking first place in Francine's contest. Well done! Love, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 8:59 PM
Congrats on your success in the contest...well done. BG
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June 27, 2011 at 2:52 PM
Congratulations on your win Francine's contest, lovely words written. Alexa
Guzzi Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 1:47 PM
lovely thought two beautiful sentences. Congrad's Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 1:22 PM
Congrats George on your first place win with this spectacular senryu my friend.. perfect words ..luv..
Well Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 1:20 PM
lovely expression! congrats on your win!
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 11:55 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sensuous Senryu's" contest George. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 11:48 AM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, george
Smith Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 11:35 AM
congrats on you first place win
Deane Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 10:40 AM
Congrats on your first place win in Francine's contest
Jarvis Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 10:37 AM
Beautiful.Congrats on the first place , God Bless:)
Neels Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 10:25 AM
Wow George, I absolutely love this.. Congratulations on your first place win ;)
Muzzey Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 10:01 AM
Congratulations George on your first place win with this tender write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Roberts Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 10:00 AM
this is THE most romantic entry of all 35 , congrats on your first place win in my contest George
Mehta Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 6:37 PM
Lovely expressions , george
Falotico Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 9:04 AM
Very nice Senryu!!!! winning wishes for you...Michael
Poet Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 8:53 AM
Sensuously beautiful!Best wishes.
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