Magic Pills

Once a man named Bill,
Was eating unnecessary pills.
But what he didn't know was,
He was standing in a pool of sauce.
So......., cheers to the magic pills!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 28, 2013 at 2:38 AM
Nitya, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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May 27, 2013 at 1:03 PM
Hi Nitya, a fun and interesting limerick... and yes cheers to the magic pills... xox~ Linda
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