Magic Path

I wish there was a magic path
that lead to you
with no way out.

I wish but all I see ahead of me-
an endless field
with thorns and shields,
that send me back
where my feet bleed.

And here, I wish there was a magic path
that lead to you with no way back,
but all I see - closed gates ahead of me
that send me back with a broken heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Castellenas Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 4:24 AM
Closed door leave open wounds. But we will learn sweetness and pain. Thank you Victoria for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
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November 26, 2019 at 1:29 PM
This is a heartbreaking write my friend.. no one wants a closed door...
Georgieva Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 1:38 PM
hopefully it didn't make you sad, Silent..it is just that to me it seems to be always closed..:/
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