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Flowing river’s beating drums Open up all of mind’s doors Overwhelming internal spurts Give rise to verses of sentimental words Big and small rocks in the river Show foundations of natural graceful water structures Snowy foam on surface of water Resembles glossy silvery stirring pinnacles Golden rays of mid afternoon sun Sparkle nearby vegetation Bushes appearing near rocks of the stream Bring back lotus floras' elapsed reminiscence Colorful butterflies and bees Enjoy the season’s remaining flower glees Leaping grasshoppers startle Showing unique splashes of brilliantly colored wings Softly blowing wind’s gust Cuddles the body with its tender touch Melodies of brook’s sweet jingles Lulls the mind, helps enjoy the concert Liveliness at the banks of the river Show dynamism of nature’s life-force Jovial mind becomes ecstatic Spreads out its vibrant expressive feathers

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Date: 5/4/2021 12:45:00 PM
This is really great poetry--I see those images in your lively words. As serene and beautiful as your photo--superbly done, Smita.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 5/10/2021 10:44:00 AM
So sweet of you! thank you Vijay!!
Date: 10/9/2019 10:33:00 AM
wonderfully expressed, I always enjoy poems about nature - I especially enjoyed the 4th stanza. DHolmes
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/9/2019 1:18:00 PM
Nature always encourages me to live in the moment by its purity. Thanks for visiting and commenting David!
Date: 9/25/2019 5:54:00 PM
Hello Smita Kulkarni, a beautiful poem of nature. have a nice evening my friend.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 9/25/2019 10:47:00 PM
Thank you for your sweet comment Darlene!

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