Magic of Riverbank

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Flowing river’s beating drums
Open up all of mind’s doors 
Overwhelming internal spurts 
Give rise to verses of sentimental words

Big and small rocks in the river 
Show foundations of natural graceful water structures 
Snowy foam on surface of water 
Resembles glossy silvery stirring pinnacles

Golden rays of mid afternoon sun
Sparkle nearby vegetation
Bushes appearing near rocks of the stream 
Bring back lotus floras' elapsed reminiscence

Colorful butterflies and bees
Enjoy the season’s remaining flower glees
Leaping grasshoppers startle
Showing unique splashes of brilliantly colored wings 

Softly blowing wind’s gust
Cuddles the body with its tender touch
Melodies of brook’s sweet jingles
Lulls the mind, helps enjoy the concert

Liveliness at the banks of the river 
Show dynamism of nature’s life-force
Jovial mind becomes ecstatic 
Spreads out its vibrant expressive feathers

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Date: 5/4/2021 12:45:00 PM
This is really great poetry--I see those images in your lively words. As serene and beautiful as your photo--superbly done, Smita.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 5/10/2021 10:44:00 AM
So sweet of you! thank you Vijay!!
Date: 10/9/2019 10:33:00 AM
wonderfully expressed, I always enjoy poems about nature - I especially enjoyed the 4th stanza. DHolmes
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/9/2019 1:18:00 PM
Nature always encourages me to live in the moment by its purity. Thanks for visiting and commenting David!
Date: 9/25/2019 5:54:00 PM
Hello Smita Kulkarni, a beautiful poem of nature. have a nice evening my friend.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 9/25/2019 10:47:00 PM
Thank you for your sweet comment Darlene!
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