Magic of Morning

More Morning Magic

Pure merriment springs dressed as a sunrise surprise
Sparking allure in clear dewdrop rhapsodies
Dainty crystalline demure glee giggles
Enchantment embraces haute couture on quivering trees
Laughing magic – Auroras in miniature set free

11-5-21
Contest: Something Beautiful Five Line Rhyme
Sponsor: Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Faulkner Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 4:54 PM
Congrats on your win, Sam! I like the unique rhymes you have here, also the alliteration adds an extra charm, and your last line so playful!
Kauffman Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 11:13 AM
Hi Michelle! Your lovely message was like a sunrise - made me :)! Finding five rhymes, that made sense, was a bit of challenge, but I do love the result. This was a fun new form. As I said to Susan, what would we do without Rhymezone and the Thesaurus!!! Thank you for your support. I am honored indeed! Sending you blessings of gleeful giggles!
Messina Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 3:06 PM
Whoa, Sam. Now this is a morning I can wake up to everyday. Beautifully written and so well done. Congratulations on your win! Love & hugs...Charlie
Kauffman Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 11:08 AM
What a lovely thought, Charlie! That definitely brings a :) to my face and lifts up my heart. I loved your new poetic format - once I got the hang of it - and am so grateful for your placement with the opportunity to explore morning dewdrops in a new way. Sending you many blessings and hug along with deep appreciation for all that you do on the soup!
Buehler Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Your skilled pen captures so many magical delights of morning, Sam. Congratulations on your win with this fantastic beauty. Kindest regards, Evelyn :)
Kauffman Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 11:04 AM
Hi Evelyn! Sending you much gratitude and many thanks for your beautiful message and congratulations! There is a mystical magic about the start of a new day. I was hoping to capture that wonder and awe. Thank you for your affirming, and uplifting, message. Sending you blessings of merriment and mirth!
Mcintosh Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 10:13 AM
Love it! God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Kauffman Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 9:43 AM
Thank you dear friend! There is magic and merriment in the morning! Sending you all the blessings of the season and a hug!
Jayasankar Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 6:41 AM
Your captured the beauty of morning so well in this write dear Sam...your poem sparkles in imagery my friend..."auroras in miniature set free"....loved this...Best wishes and hugs...~ Ani
Kauffman Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Hi Ani! Thank you so very much for your lovely note. I really enjoyed Charlie's new form - once I got the hang of it! For me dawn laughs and giggles with joy. Thank you for sharing this sunrise with me. Sending you the blessings of joy!
Proxenos Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 9:14 AM
Laughing Magic you write, sparking allure, pure merriment - all of this you offer us, your avid readers and fans on poetry soup - a splendid write Sam. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Kauffman Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Jennifer, thank you! Your beautiful message humbles me! I feel so blessed by friends, like you, here on the soup and inspired by the uplifting writing. I was hoping to capture the beauty of dawn. Thank you for your affirmation! It is a blessing! Hope you are doing well. Sending you all the blessings of the Advent-Christmas season that is coming upon us quickly!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 6:04 AM
Dear Sam, your poem is magical the way mornings are magical with sunrise and dewdrops. I truly love this image - "Enchantment embraces haute couture on quivering trees". Warm wishes ~ Mala
Kauffman Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Dearest Mala, your delightful note was like the joy of a new morning :)! Thank you so much. Had fun with Charlie's new poem format - once I understood it - and had a ball finding the rhymes! I am so glad that we got to share in the magical allure of a beautiful morning. Sending you all the blessings of the season, much love and, of course, a hug!
Ashley Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 6:51 PM
My Dear Rhyme Time friend, your brilliant pen captures the magical pairing of sunrise and dew with lush, enchanting, vivacious imagery. I love how dew drops capture and reflect the light and I adore the sprightly spirit of your poem. "Auroras in miniature set free" - simply splendid.. as are your rhyme choices - splendid, creative and alluring! Best wishes for a win and best wishes, love and hugs sent on gleeful giggles.. ~Susan
Kauffman Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 4:38 PM
My Dear Rhyme Time friend, your lovely message sparkles like dewdrops in the morning sun and in this time of early darkness gives light to my days and twilights! Thank you dear friend! Had to go at this format a couple of times to get the rhyme right! What would we do without the Thesaurus?!! and Rhymezone. For me they really inspire creativity! Your message is full of morning joy! So grateful for your best wishes. Sending much merriment springing up to brighten your day with laughing magic!
Canerdy Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 5:48 PM
Such appealing use of personification in this lovely piece, Sam. Janice
Kauffman Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 4:58 PM
Janice, many thanks and much gratitude for your delightful message! Thank you so much. Had fun with Charlie's new format. Sending you all the blessings of morning!
Cunningham Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 10:48 AM
You captured the start of a brand new day well Sam. Hope your weekend is going well. Over Fork Over. Tom
Kauffman Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 4:53 PM
Thank you so much Tom! There is truly a magic in the dawning of a new day! Thank you so much for affirming my efforts!!! Hope you are doing well. Sending you bright mornings. Over Fork Over!
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