Smita Kulkarni Poet Rhyme

Magic of a Mountain Climb

Rocky trail
Fallen trees
Fresh scent of pine leaves

Scattered acorns
Wild blooms
Thundering sounds of a graceful brook

Brightly red 
Cylindrical Snow flowers
Show-stoppers for enthusiastic hikers

Chirpy Jays
Traces of wild foxes
Immensity of rocky mainstays 

Spring storm
Shivery gales
Sprays of tiny snowflakes

Wood bridge
Nimble stream
Magic of a mountain climb

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Duke Beaufort July 7, 2021 at 2:26 PM There is something magic in your view. Bringing it to us is a great gift....so TY! Smita Kulkarni July 14, 2021 at 2:50 PM There is always a magic in the nature which makes us enjoy the view, don't you think?

Gershon Wolf July 4, 2021 at 5:41 PM All of these things, Smita, wondrously and preciously penned. Thank you, Gershon Smita Kulkarni July 6, 2021 at 11:43 AM Thank you Gershon! It's the inspiration from the woods :)

Vijay Pandit July 4, 2021 at 2:51 PM Lovely poem, Smita, that speaks to the reader and takes the reader along on your scenic ride. I was there too. Smita Kulkarni July 6, 2021 at 11:42 AM Thank you Vijay! The ride was absolutely scenic and very refreshing!

Besma Riabi Dziri June 17, 2021 at 10:24 AM What a scenic hike! No place is as healing and carefree as Nature! You have taken me heart and soul to the magic of Mother Earth! A genuine rendition into an expressive poetry! A great pleasure to read you, Smita! My warmest wishes and deepest regards and blessings. Smita Kulkarni June 23, 2021 at 10:49 AM So sweet of you Besma to stop by! It's a great pleasure to read your comment too! Thank you!

Rama Balasubramanian June 15, 2021 at 6:14 AM Wonderful images, felt I was on a walk with you. Smita Kulkarni June 15, 2021 at 11:01 AM Thank you Rama!

Sara Kendrick May 31, 2021 at 9:27 AM A very descriptive work about a mountain walk at some point in your life. I went there through reading your poem. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Smita Kulkarni June 6, 2021 at 8:39 PM Thank you Sara for visiting!

Harry Horsman May 29, 2021 at 1:29 AM Love your journey and how you take the read there. Lovely poem. Smita Kulkarni June 6, 2021 at 8:39 PM Thank you Harry!

Judy Ball May 27, 2021 at 2:40 PM Beautiful imagery here. I love walking in the woods and listening to the sounds of nature. Not big on city life at all and hate being buried in concrete in the city. Good job. God Bless, JB Smita Kulkarni May 28, 2021 at 10:00 AM Thank you Judy! Nature has so much to offer besides the truth and tranquility!! I truly enjoy being in nature!

John Gondolf May 27, 2021 at 12:54 PM Wonderful imagery, Smita, I felt like I was right there hiking through the woods. John Smita Kulkarni May 28, 2021 at 10:00 AM Thank you John!