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Magic Moon Dust

"Magic Moon Dust" I see you up there watching over me back-dropped by the sky netted by the sea with those eyes...that stare. I hear you call a haunting pull that beckons me across my wall. I see you shining Oh! so brightly. Won't you touch me there moon with all your dust your magic for broken weary hearts so once again the tastes of Spring explode and bloom from me within... Shine! Oh! Shine! Bright Moon on me as I speak! Put magic moon dust from my head to feet... and Please!...Make it soon! ©deborah burch 3/31/2012

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Caribbean Seawolf

Date: 5/2/2012 9:10:00 PM

Magic Moon Dust... hmmmmm..... why didn't I meownveryself ever think of that? I want some. Toss a sack in yer seabag. Will it work sailing the Seven Skys of Majic Wonder & Merriment??? SeaWolf

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/3/2012 5:47:00 AM

Aye...!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/31/2012 6:09:00 PM

Congrats on ALL your recent successes, Deb...Just amazing your recent works! This moon dust theme is done exquisitely also!...You have drawn me in and placed me amongst your magic! So nice! :) Gwendolen

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/31/2012 8:31:00 PM

Thank you so very very much for all your wonderful encouragement Gwendolen!!! It has been so endearing to me and uplifting!! You are so kind...thanks so much...big hugs my friend,love deb

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/31/2012 4:18:00 PM

Very cool form. One in which I have yet to try. But you have giving me a great lesson here.. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs Michael

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/31/2012 8:29:00 PM

Give it a go Michael...if I can do it I have no doubt you most certainly can!! Shoot the Moon!! ;) Big huggsss,love deb