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Magic Moments

Love’s lovely as long as it lasts, love shapes our future and our past. Memories made will never fade, they will endure all of our days.
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After so long, a certain date, a certain place Clouds suddenly cleared and out came the sun We both felt the magical charm Wasn't it simply the best There lies an image in the mirror of my soul Those sparkly eyes, that voice, the dimpled grin. You unlocked my heart and instantly stepped right in All at once my life changed from cold to gold Memories of a day well blessed Held in your tender arms From the very first sweet moment my heart was won First time ever that we met face to face. I long to see you again, I can hardly wait Tho’ it be a tangled web we have spun Your loving is a soothing balm Calms the beat beneath breast Precious memories to treasure as years unfold Until the moon and stars forget to spin.
16th January 2021
A Little Memory - My Invented Form - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France * * * Fictional poetry, written for the contest only.
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Date: 1/22/2021 7:08:00 AM
What a beautiful poem, not only do you write outstanding poetry but you choose your topics so lovingly - congratulations dear friend I love this poem' Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/22/2021 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer, very much. Hugs and blessing sent straight back to you ~ Belle
Date: 1/19/2021 2:44:00 PM
Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/19/2021 3:07:00 PM
Thank you very much Sara... Belle
Date: 1/19/2021 12:10:00 PM
Belle, congratulations on your win in my contest, A Little Memory using my invented Rhyme form, wonderful poem, I like it a lot and the image and quote too _Constance
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/19/2021 12:50:00 PM
Thank you Constance, I enjoyed the challenge of your Invented Rhyme form and am very pleased with the placement... Belle
Date: 1/19/2021 10:25:00 AM
Ah, this tangled web you have spun comes out so clear in the face of beauty and love, winning wishes are being sent just for you dear one. Have a blessed day. Hugs
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/19/2021 12:47:00 PM
Thank you very much Mystic, you have a blessed day too... Hugs, Belle
Date: 1/17/2021 5:56:00 AM
Indeed such lovable, magical moments! Beautiful in every way, Belle. I enjoyed the read.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/17/2021 7:00:00 AM
Than you Vijay, most appreciated ... Belle
Date: 1/17/2021 2:34:00 AM
Magical poem for the contest. Your poetic acumen at its best. ~~
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/17/2021 5:38:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed Victor ~~ Belle
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