Magic Carpet

Racing through the night sky
high above the sand.
Just bought a magic carpet
cause' I've finally sold my land.

I use to ride a camel
but their to stinking hot.
Just flew right past an airbase
I hope I don't get shot.

I'm going to see my honey.
The one who has my heart.
I still have lots of money
so we can finally make a start.

I land on kelly's rooftop
to show off my new ride.
She jumps right on and off we go
smiling side by side.

We ride around for hours
and time just seems to pass.
I love my magic carpet
cause' it don't use any gas!


Dustin Self (magic carpet contest)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 6:46 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in SKAT's "Magic Carpet Ride" contest Dustin. Love, Carol
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September 5, 2012 at 9:28 AM
Thank you!!
A  Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 6:24 PM
DUSTIN , A LATE CONGRATS WITH MY MAGIC CARPET RIDE CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT
Self Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 9:28 AM
Thank you!!
A   Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 12:53 PM
DUSTIN, a very nice lovely entry... much enjoyed your win,, always~PD
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September 3, 2012 at 6:35 AM
Thank you! Have a great day!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 6:23 AM
Congratulations Dustin, what a wonderful ride and winning place and love this xx
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September 3, 2012 at 6:34 AM
Thank you! Have a wonderful day!
Night Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 10:31 AM
lol love it man you get a 7
Self Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 3:37 PM
Thanks man.I wish I could get a real one! Have a good day.
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August 21, 2012 at 10:48 PM
For sure a cheap mode of transport to paint the sky red with. Good luck to you in the contest, Dustin.
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August 21, 2012 at 11:01 PM
Thanks again Delysia!
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