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Magic Black Kittens

This is the tale of two little black kittens. One has a white chest; the other, white mittens. A boy cat, a girl cat, they have simple names: These two, Bat and Gat, are of Hero Cat fame. Though not very old, they have storied pasts; The tales of these critters have spread far and fast. So if you’ve a moment, come set for a spell, And we’ll do our best to provide a quick tell. It all started out with a flight to Ukraine, And zombified rats that were raging, insane. There’s the one where they saved a kid goat named Split Using mountain cat screams through an old drainage ditch. Or maybe an unwelcome picnic day guest: A snake who sneezed pepper, got rattled, and left. The story of Blueberry’s rescue’s contagious: With Juno’s help, scared dogs away from her cages. “Oh, come on!” you are thinking, “Just simply tall tales!” Perhaps you’d believe, if you knew the details. For these little cats have black magical powers; They’ve spellbound my grandkids for several hours. There’s the time when, while rafting, they fell in the lake, And the great lurking turtle showed up for their sake. Or maybe the time when they took the squirrels’ nuts? Admitting their error: that really took guts. My favorite is likely the old chicken thief, And building the Tar Chick to give that coon grief. At last, there's Bat’s failure to launch to the moon; He’s healed from his wounds, won’t attempt that one soon. These days Bat and Gat just hang out with the kids; Did they really do this? My grands said they did! ————- FIRST PLACE WINNER For the Black Cat Poetry Contest Sponsored by Robert James Liguori Written 03/23/2022

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Date: 4/4/2022 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/wonderful~~story/write. Have a blessed day...................
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Date: 3/24/2022 3:09:00 AM
Fabulous end rhymes " “Oh, come on!” you are thinking, “Just simply tall tales!” Perhaps you’d believe, if you knew the details." Wow!
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Date: 3/23/2022 7:20:00 PM
As usual, I know nothing about the contest... That said, I think your write is significant for what's needed to break the stalemate in Ukraine, i.e., a bit of magic: Either a bit of the supernatural or a visit from the supranatural One. We can hope and pray... Great write! ~ gw
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/23/2022 8:09:00 PM
Thanks, me and my silly cats!
Date: 3/23/2022 4:23:00 PM
Not sure if a girl cat has nuts . . . "Or maybe the time when the cats took the squirrels nuts? Admitting their error; that really took guts" and of course this is all real, the Grand kids said so, didn't they, love it . . . ; )
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 3/23/2022 7:34:00 PM
Squirrels nuts, there a metaphor there somewhere . . . ; )
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 3/23/2022 7:16:00 PM
Trans cats, I like it, ha, ha, ha . . . ; )
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/23/2022 5:04:00 PM
Actually, that works too, lol, who says I don’t take suggestions :-)
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/23/2022 4:46:00 PM
Lol, Bat and Gat, trans cats
Date: 3/23/2022 2:05:00 PM
So clever and cute, Jeff. I think Robert will like this a lot. Good luck! I think I'll pass on this contest. I can't imagine what I'd write about a black cat. We always had white ones, to which I was allergic.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/23/2022 2:08:00 PM
yeah, not particularly superstitious, and mostly allergic as well - glad Bat and Gat are outside cats!

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