Magic Beans

I found some strange multi coloured beans
And planted them in well turned soil
With care I watered them and pulled weeds
yet after a month not one single shoot.

I had cause to go down in my cellar
looking for some tools and to my amazement 
it was full of leaves and flowers
These strange plants grew under ground.

Down, still further down they went
so I climbed down and down
At last I reached the bottom
and all was upside down.  

A vast land where all walked upside down
yes folks, they were walking on their heads
some birds too flying upside down
My head reeled and I climbed back up.

I decided not to venture there again
after all there is enough weirdness up here
to last me several life times
so no gold or giants just an upside down world

written 01/31/2015 

shadow Hamilton 

contest Magic Beans
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gasun Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 5:51 AM
This is a great delight my very dear friend, Shadow. I enjoyed so much the read. Thanks a lot for sharing and my warm congratulations as well on your great win! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
Belcher Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 7:14 PM
Congratulations on your win Shadow!
A. Sharma Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 4:46 AM
Brilliant deep write Shadow, loved to read today! Congrats on awesome win!
A  Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 12:29 AM
Shadow, CONGRATULATIONS! A sweet Magic bean Win*** Love **SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 5:49 PM
glad to see this one made the winners' list, shadow. I hope I have visited some of your newer poems lately. I am trying to keep up but not sure if I am really doing it. Congrats to you, dear.
Kendrick Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 4:49 PM
Cute story told in winning poetic form..I enjoyed reading your winner..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you stopping by..Congrats ...Sara
Roper Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 4:07 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win. Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day
Haight Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Such a magical and mystical story, Shadow. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 10:42 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Shadow:-) Hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 12:38 PM
ty Jan hugs
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 8:18 AM
Your poem is my fav. Congratulations on your win Shadow. Wish you Happy Valentine XXXX Rajat
Hamilton Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 12:38 PM
aw ty so much Rajat hugs
A   Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 2:48 AM
Shadow, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog or poem "50 shades of what?" if you'd like. Wishing you a Happy Valentine's Day, thank you for the Magic Beans Poem -Always & Forever- LINDA
Hamilton Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 12:37 PM
ty Linda will do hugs
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 11:31 AM
A different look at "Jack and the Beanstalk" story. Full of insight and humor Shadow. Enjoyed your poem very much. God bless)))) rajat
Hamilton Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Ty Rajat hugs
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 9:38 PM
this is a very unique and clever tale you have woven, Shadow. I like it very much!!!
Hamilton Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 1:06 AM
ty Andrea good to see you hugs
Roper Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 8:03 PM
How wonderful,Shadow, I love your magical world of upside down, I might fit in. a 7 Blessings dear friend
Hamilton Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 1:08 AM
ty Eve all aboard lol hugs
Allison Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 6:28 PM
a magical mystical story Shadow - I have enough trouble dealing with being in the upright world at the moment lol - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 1:07 AM
ty Jan know that feeling hugs
Nance Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 5:57 PM
Interesting events that took place with your means, nice imagination.
Hamilton Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 1:06 AM
ty Casarah hugs
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