Magic Beans

long ago a lazy man lived in a village’s hut
                           he became poor because earning was shut
                            he was sleeping on his bed at one night 
                             an old bag over his head hanging tight
                            dreaming that bag as a magic beans bag
                      with that he would win over all the bad days’ crag 
                         with costly glittering diamonds that was full
                            to become a rich man he got a nice tool
                          at that time a rat cut down the bag’s rope
                     as the bag fell down he woke up and gone all hope



For Contest: Sponsored by PD
Written by: bldevnath
Date: on 7th January 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/22/2015 5:21:00 AM
This is a great delight my very dear friend BL. I enjoyed so much the read. Thanks a lot for sharing and big congratulations on your great win as well. Big hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora
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Bl Devnath
Date: 2/22/2015 9:56:00 AM
Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your wishes happy to see you in my page. Loved always,bl
Date: 2/17/2015 4:10:00 AM
Congrats on great win BL...love
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Bl Devnath
Date: 2/17/2015 1:05:00 PM
Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always,bl
Date: 2/16/2015 12:29:00 AM
BL, , CONGRATULATIONS! A sweet Magic bean Win*** Love **SKAT
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Bl Devnath
Date: 2/16/2015 10:54:00 AM
Thanks a lot my lovely lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always,bl
Date: 2/14/2015 4:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.Shame on the rat a 7. Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day
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Bl Devnath
Date: 2/15/2015 12:02:00 PM
Wish you Happy Valentine Day too. Loved always,bl
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Bl Devnath
Date: 2/15/2015 12:00:00 PM
Thanks a lot for wishing me congratulation, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Date: 2/14/2015 10:40:00 AM
great moral BL many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Bl Devnath
Date: 2/15/2015 11:59:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your nice wishing comment. Loved always,bl
Date: 2/14/2015 2:48:00 AM
BL, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog or poem "50 shades of what?" if you'd like. Wishing you a Happy Valentine's Day, thank you for the Magic Beans Poem -Always & Forever- LINDA
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Bl Devnath
Date: 2/15/2015 11:58:00 AM
Thanks a lot my *friend of always for wishing me congratulation. I will read certainly. Wish you Valentine Day too. Loved always,bl
Date: 2/3/2015 4:43:00 PM
Hi BL, NICE TO KNOW YOU. ALLS LOST TO A BAD DREAM. GREAT WRITE! I READ YOUR POEMS , VERY DEEP
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Bl Devnath
Date: 2/4/2015 11:49:00 AM
Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always,bl
Date: 1/8/2015 8:37:00 AM
- Proficient my dear friend Bl, I like it a lot !!! - hope you will win in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 1/8/2015 8:45:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your wining wishing beautiful comment. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Date: 1/7/2015 6:38:00 AM
love the moral here BL, good luck in contest
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Bl Devnath
Date: 1/7/2015 8:46:00 AM
Thanks a lot given to you through lovely vibration of my true heart for your lovely comment and for wishing me good luck in contest. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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