Bl Devnath Poet Rhyme

Magic Beans

long ago a lazy man lived in a village’s hut
                           he became poor because earning was shut
                            he was sleeping on his bed at one night 
                             an old bag over his head hanging tight
                            dreaming that bag as a magic beans bag
                      with that he would win over all the bad days’ crag 
                         with costly glittering diamonds that was full
                            to become a rich man he got a nice tool
                          at that time a rat cut down the bag’s rope
                     as the bag fell down he woke up and gone all hope



For Contest: Sponsored by PD
Written by: bldevnath
Date: on 7th January 2015

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Len Gasun February 22, 2015 at 5:21 AM This is a great delight my very dear friend BL. I enjoyed so much the read. Thanks a lot for sharing and big congratulations on your great win as well. Big hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora Bl Devnath February 22, 2015 at 9:56 AM Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your wishes happy to see you in my page. Loved always,bl

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 17, 2015 at 4:10 AM Congrats on great win BL...love Bl Devnath February 17, 2015 at 1:05 PM Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always,bl

Skat A February 16, 2015 at 12:29 AM BL, , CONGRATULATIONS! A sweet Magic bean Win*** Love **SKAT Bl Devnath February 16, 2015 at 10:54 AM Thanks a lot my lovely lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always,bl

Eve Roper February 14, 2015 at 4:10 PM Congratulations on your win.Shame on the rat a 7. Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day Bl Devnath February 15, 2015 at 12:02 PM Wish you Happy Valentine Day too. Loved always,bl Bl Devnath February 15, 2015 at 12:00 PM Thanks a lot for wishing me congratulation, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison February 14, 2015 at 10:40 AM great moral BL many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx Bl Devnath February 15, 2015 at 11:59 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your nice wishing comment. Loved always,bl

Poet Destroyer A February 14, 2015 at 2:48 AM BL, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog or poem "50 shades of what?" if you'd like. Wishing you a Happy Valentine's Day, thank you for the Magic Beans Poem -Always & Forever- LINDA Bl Devnath February 15, 2015 at 11:58 AM Thanks a lot my *friend of always for wishing me congratulation. I will read certainly. Wish you Valentine Day too. Loved always,bl

Ralph Sergi February 3, 2015 at 4:43 PM Hi BL, NICE TO KNOW YOU. ALLS LOST TO A BAD DREAM. GREAT WRITE! I READ YOUR POEMS , VERY DEEP Bl Devnath February 4, 2015 at 11:49 AM Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen January 8, 2015 at 8:37 AM - Proficient my dear friend Bl, I like it a lot !!! - hope you will win in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath January 8, 2015 at 8:45 AM Thanks a lot for your wining wishing beautiful comment. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Harry Horsman January 7, 2015 at 6:38 AM love the moral here BL, good luck in contest Bl Devnath January 7, 2015 at 8:46 AM Thanks a lot given to you through lovely vibration of my true heart for your lovely comment and for wishing me good luck in contest. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl