Magic

A flower in all its full bloom A child in their mother`s womb Stars shining in the desert sky High above the clouds do the eagles fly Showing us all magical moments Visions that will never die For contest.....Nothing would I change

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2014 5:07:00 PM

it is nice seeing you on the winning list... , It is what it is, and I love what you made of this poem... Congrats. ~have a nice day~ <3 LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/19/2014 7:50:00 AM

Congratulations on the fine win, very convincing expressions, richard

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2013 11:50:00 PM

Hmmm, i see you didn't make the revision on "it's." Oh well, maybe that contest judge won't care! I was just pointing it out because it's one of the reasons I am not always placing some people in my own contests. You are not the only one doing that!!

Richard Ferry
Date: 9/18/2013 1:08:00 AM

ok better now!! thanks ............riock

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/16/2013 8:39:00 AM

love the blooming magic.. Richard, thanks for stopping by my latest... miss hearing from you...Linda

Richard Ferry
Date: 9/16/2013 10:16:00 PM

Hi Linda Been awhile Hope all is well........Rick

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2013 8:20:00 AM

very nice one, Richard. About the possessive its, don't use it's!!! Thought i would let you know in case you ever enter one of my contests. I've been throwing out poems in my last contests for using it's incorrectly. I hope you are enjoying Soup. I love reading your poems.

Richard Ferry
Date: 9/16/2013 10:16:00 PM

Thanks teach I will remember that