Richard Ferry Poet Light Verse

Magic

A flower in all its full bloom        A child in their mother`s womb       Stars shining in the desert sky       High above the clouds do the eagles fly       Showing us all magical moments       Visions that will never die                For contest.....Nothing would I change

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Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2014 at 5:07 PM it is nice seeing you on the winning list... , It is what it is, and I love what you made of this poem... Congrats. ~have a nice day~ <3 LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta March 19, 2014 at 7:50 AM Congratulations on the fine win, very convincing expressions, richard

Andrea Dietrich September 17, 2013 at 11:50 PM Hmmm, i see you didn't make the revision on "it's." Oh well, maybe that contest judge won't care! I was just pointing it out because it's one of the reasons I am not always placing some people in my own contests. You are not the only one doing that!! Richard Ferry September 18, 2013 at 1:08 AM ok better now!! thanks ............riock

Poet Destroyer A September 16, 2013 at 8:39 AM love the blooming magic.. Richard, thanks for stopping by my latest... miss hearing from you...Linda Richard Ferry September 16, 2013 at 10:16 PM Hi Linda Been awhile Hope all is well........Rick

Andrea Dietrich September 16, 2013 at 8:20 AM very nice one, Richard. About the possessive its, don't use it's!!! Thought i would let you know in case you ever enter one of my contests. I've been throwing out poems in my last contests for using it's incorrectly. I hope you are enjoying Soup. I love reading your poems. Richard Ferry September 16, 2013 at 10:16 PM Thanks teach I will remember that