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This poem was inspired by in my interest in colour and the environment 

 

First blush fountain azimuth of hued rays wet patio shrub basket in the haze zealous heartland tower cry as life force celebrate and savour August rare days Magenta skylines cluster silken clouds blue ocean colour eyes that worship shrouds a fancy surreal canvass so divine it mesmerises jubilant bright crowds Summer fun arcades stoke our dream world mind gasps of red tint bliss a peak season find earthbound poise dilates refulgent cascade rocking beach tune fare blurs dark strain purblind Sapphire plinths that anchor stoic ambit vision on parade my high rise gambit traipse amid the dahlia euphoric seventh heaven rapture’s cloud nine orbit

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Date: 1/29/2024 11:05:00 PM
Oh wow, this is a beautiful poem, dear Howard. I especially love your unique wordplay and the spellbinding imagery that you've woven so effortlessly with so much artistic reflection.. "Magenta skylines cluster silken clouds", "blue ocean colour eyes that worship shrouds a fancy surreal canvass so divine" Ahh, such gorgeous use of colours throughout! You've impeccably crafted this with wonderful rhyming flow as well.. Loved reading this. Sending best wishes and light!
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Date: 1/29/2024 6:40:00 PM
Nicely rhyming, carefree August poem. I am looking forward to some summer fun. Thanks for these lines of enjoyment.
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Date: 1/29/2024 11:13:00 AM
Dear Howard, i am in awe of your poetic skills, I absolutely love the rhymes and metaphors as well the very artistic way youv woven words to paint imagery in the most captivating manner. I especially love the lines “ Magenta skylines cluster silken clouds blue ocean colour eyes that worship shrouds a fancy surreal canvass so divine“ i can see through those lines so well delivered. Pleasure reading your work
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Date: 1/29/2024 9:37:00 AM
The poem showcases exceptional linguistic proficiency, adept imagery, and an exploration of the consequences of progress. Your portrayal of contrasting perspectives is truly masterful, Haword. Undoubtedly, the depiction of the skyline must have been a sight of unparalleled beauty.
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Date: 1/29/2024 6:43:00 AM
Very colorful lines you have penned. Must have been a beautiful skyline. Sara K
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Date: 1/29/2024 8:51:00 AM
I appreciate that, Sara. Thanks as always for visiting my poetry page. Howard
Date: 1/29/2024 12:32:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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