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Maelstrom

Midst mild and wild tumults like eddy, vortex, swirl, and whirl, A maelstrom is a summation of curl and twirl and hurl; Weather and season get amalgamated with currents, Winds, storms, gales, squalls, haboobs, and wuthers become deterrents; Vacuum, like caves or tunnels, into hearts of water, That curve and cleave and crack, and clang and constantly clatter...! I have never been to the far or deep sea for fishing, Or for an adventure that involves mind-body squishing; Corvettes, cruisers, battle crafts, frigates, and great galleons, Have got gulped by the colossal maelstrom daedalians; To the courtyards of the sea gods, these underpasses lead, Wherein, motionless, creatures feel absolute bondage freed...! Chaos, violence, and ethnic hatred in every form, A ship-devouring maelstrom as an innate psychic norm; Regions, regimes, trade, and populace seeking protection, Religious democracy coming to conscience flexion; Wanes into vain vanquish; drains virtues into cosmic pain, Strife to swim against maelstroms is our existential gain...!!! 20 March 2023 'M' Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Theme: Maelstrom Rhyme Checked At: Rhyme Zone Syllables Checked At: How May Syllables

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Date: 4/7/2023 10:08:00 AM
Chris, this is just a marvel of twirling, swirling, whirring images and rhyme! What creativity all brought together as metaphor for your last stanza! Congratulations for your win! Easter blessings of joy to you!
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Date: 4/3/2023 5:11:00 AM
Chrusturaj, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 3/22/2023 7:35:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/22/2023 8:05:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/22/2023 3:11:00 AM
excellent poetic writings on the theme of maelstrom; I enjoyed; congrats for the placement
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/22/2023 3:46:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/21/2023 10:56:00 AM
- Maelstrom was for me the most difficult topic... you mastered it perfectly - Congratulations on your win, Alex :) - hugs
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/21/2023 10:35:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/21/2023 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/story. Enjoyed It. Have a great/blessed day writing away...........
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/21/2023 10:34:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/21/2023 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations, Dear Christuraj, on your win. Your descriptive vocabulary and images are stunning!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/21/2023 9:21:00 AM
Thank you very much. Glad to hear from you after a long time. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/20/2023 8:16:00 PM
Swimming with imagery, great use of words, Christuraj:)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/20/2023 10:27:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/20/2023 7:57:00 PM
Christuraj, you have a such a way of using words. They flow rhythmically and beautifully. Fabulous work! I loved it, and should be a top win. :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/20/2023 10:27:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/20/2023 2:57:00 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/20/2023 7:36:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/20/2023 12:10:00 PM
yes, you captured SO much with your poem. WELL done.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/20/2023 7:37:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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