Madness Strings Love

A lone violin 
cried through time
this sadness wept
by strings divine

Sorrowed in madness
stringed to maid fair 
his pain of love
lost to deep cares

Vision of beauty
her hair alight
shining a beacon
splendid to sight

Lost in his love
failure to see
pining for him
most passionately

Angels guardian
observe from above
tears drop to hope
grace rains of love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 1:16 PM
Beautiful, delightful, dreamy write of love. Written from the heart Jayne>>James
Spence Sr Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 6:56 AM
This is such an excellent and it flow with great reverence. I like the theme of the poem and the message. The last stanza is like icing on the cake. Great job! ~Joseph
Devonshire Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 8:09 PM
You create a backdrop of romance from the start with the violin music. I enjoyed watching this sad love story unfold. Very nice write, Jayne. Best wishes, Carolyn
Pasco Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 7:40 PM
Deep and sweet.
Yates Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 7:02 PM
Very beautiful, So passionate and sorrowful... But you can feel the love the need in your words... Lovely write!
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