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Madness Strings Love

A lone violin cried through time this sadness wept by strings divine Sorrowed in madness stringed to maid fair his pain of love lost to deep cares Vision of beauty her hair alight shining a beacon splendid to sight Lost in his love failure to see pining for him most passionately Angels guardian observe from above tears drop to hope grace rains of love

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James Fraser

Date: 7/14/2009 1:16:00 PM

Beautiful, delightful, dreamy write of love. Written from the heart Jayne>>James

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/8/2009 6:56:00 AM

This is such an excellent and it flow with great reverence. I like the theme of the poem and the message. The last stanza is like icing on the cake. Great job! ~Joseph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/5/2009 8:09:00 PM

You create a backdrop of romance from the start with the violin music. I enjoyed watching this sad love story unfold. Very nice write, Jayne. Best wishes, Carolyn

Rebecca Pasco

Date: 7/5/2009 7:40:00 PM

Deep and sweet.

Ashley Yates

Date: 7/5/2009 7:02:00 PM

Very beautiful, So passionate and sorrowful... But you can feel the love the need in your words... Lovely write!