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Madness of More

in a dream I lingered in its stream I hungered for a more vivid illusion more aesthetically pleasing to exist within a delusion and suddenly I was seizing a stunning opportunity enchanted and hypnotized I waved good-bye to reality and slowly opened my eyes and now I linger in the madness of a dream I no longer hunger consumed by my scream

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Date: 12/4/2019 2:46:00 PM
Thought I'd pop in and see if you were still dreaming my friend.
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Date: 7/8/2018 12:29:00 PM
Cool poem -JT
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Date: 3/26/2018 1:26:00 AM
I am enchanted and hypnotized by these descriptive words waving goodbye to reality. I enjoyed this very much.
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Date: 6/12/2017 9:20:00 PM
Dreams can be wild for sure. A great write, Christy... hugs :)
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Date: 4/17/2017 3:56:00 AM
it happens, just like that at times. Your write is reliable. well done.
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Date: 3/22/2017 2:28:00 PM
- Dreams are exciting ... both beautiful and strange ... - A unique and great poem, Christy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/21/2017 2:38:00 PM
You tell a story with such freshness and reality that it soon attaches itself to our reality and we take partial ownership of the emotions poured forth. Emile.
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Date: 3/20/2017 4:30:00 PM
Sometimes it is hard to discern dreams from reality.....truly becomes a madness.
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Date: 3/20/2017 3:34:00 PM
That must've been some dream Christy if it is still ongoing. Once again, wonderfully creative and expressive.
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