Andrew Jacob Jung Poet Rhyme

Madness

The giants appear 
When winter skies clear 
To combat the march 
The battle is here 
Bearing the lance 
As the drive to advance 
Through the war of the floor 
And of four takes their stance 
And only one thing 
To acquire the Ring 
Of the giant that triumphs 
And calls himself King

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Solomon Ochwo-Oburu February 6, 2017 at 7:28 PM Rightly wrote rhyme. I like it, Andrew.

Rainbow Promise February 5, 2017 at 3:16 PM The war of the floor! What imagery. Great.

Ogheneruru Wekpe January 29, 2017 at 2:01 PM SPLENDID

Dana Redricks January 28, 2017 at 2:05 PM Sorry for typo, (fro) I meant, great write, I especially like the part when you said,"only one thing To acquire the Ring of the giant that triumphs and calls himself King." if we stand for what we believe and let nothing stop us from pursuing our dreams then nothing will be impossible for us.

Dana Redricks January 28, 2017 at 2:02 PM Great write, I especially like the part when you said,"only one thing To acquire the Ring of the giant that triumphs and calls himself King." if we stand for what we believe and let nothing stop us from pursuing our dreams then nothing will be impossible fro us.

Phatt Matt January 28, 2017 at 5:10 AM brilliant !!~phatt

Yushi Vi January 27, 2017 at 11:04 PM It's great!

Bl Devnath January 27, 2017 at 8:57 AM Beautiful poem beautifully expressed my dear friend, Cloudy poet

Cynthia Ferguson January 27, 2017 at 6:00 AM That is so awesome great job

Rachael Chitondwe January 27, 2017 at 5:56 AM awesome loved it

Oliver Muchuma January 26, 2017 at 9:23 PM Awesome

Matthew Anish January 26, 2017 at 9:10 PM Nice Tolkienesque flavor to this one! Congratulations on having your poetry featured! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Marsha Smith January 26, 2017 at 8:19 PM "The battle is here Bearing the lance As the drive to advance Through the war of the floor And of four takes their stance" Powerful words and Great imagery! I love the flow of this poem Well done.

Kurt Philip Behm January 26, 2017 at 8:17 PM Excellent! "Only one thing to acquire the ring"

Claudia Polydoro January 26, 2017 at 8:12 PM Amazing poem... loved it :)

Madeleine Loggia January 26, 2017 at 8:03 PM Really enjoyed this read

Robert Heemstra February 20, 2016 at 8:15 PM Loved it! Great write!