Madison

She's broken.
She just wanted her thoughts to be spoken.
For her words to mean something,
For her words to be affecting.

But she feels worthless.
Her dream was to become an actress,
to inspire others ti achieve their dreams,
but she had fallen in the streams.

She lost all of her hope,
having no way to cope. 
She wakes up every morning,
ready to start acting. 

She puts on her mask,
hoping for someone to ask,
hoping for someone to realize
how long this has been going on, and apologize.

Yet no one seems to care,
she feels like she shouldn't be there.
Since no one seems to notice her,
that is what she has inferred.

But then someone spoke up,
noticed how she was lost like a pup.
So they decided to help,
she first yelped.

For she never knew how to accept,
she only knew she wept.
Later, she saw light,
and shone bright.

She finally saw that she was someone,
not a no one,
but she meant something.
She was finally acknowledging

Her true beauty,
she found her true duty,
to help others,
and make things better.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 23, 2013 at 6:30 AM
Good morning, Ana congratulations with having your poem featured on the soups home page. Take care and enjoy the coming week. ~XOX~ *LIND
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June 18, 2013 at 8:30 AM
‡ Michael Jackson And Where There Is Love, I'll Be There ˜ How Many Priceless Precious Hearts Are As She, Beautiful Madison ˜ Stirring In Lovings Wonderful Poem; Big Kudos Unto Your Own Beauty Ana And Congratulations Upon Your Inspiring Feature. Love, John ˜ Ps., These Are The Most Beautiful Types Of Paintings; Those Which Touch The Depths In One's Deepest Soul With Their Love And Love * Another Song, 'Catch My Fall And This, Is A Light Laced Favourite.
A   Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 2:13 PM
Hey, Ana :-) a lovely poem , and person you show off in your poem. I wish everyone would show off the inner true beauty... what a better world this would be . Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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June 11, 2013 at 12:41 PM
- Hi Ana, enjoyable with new members in P-Soup - I will welcome you, and thank you for your first poem. - I hope there will be many more in the future. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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June 10, 2013 at 8:06 PM
Hello Ana, a true poem of inspiration , a wonderful approach on your fascinating first poem on the soup... This hear my friend is a sweet welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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