Made

MADE of sock puppets, dunk tanks and bumper cars. socks with holes, holes for heads all wet, stinky in fact picture the bumper cars bumping, bruising each choosing their own way headed for you and me out of control nothing seems to matter it’s all clatter “Collateral damage,” that’s all no matter towns burning blue uniforms stewing little ones, immovable, staring deck of cards, blue and red thrown sky high sobering thought… God is watching 8/19/2020

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/20/2020 4:01:00 PM

This is a phenomenal piece of poetry. A FAVE for me Kim. A FAVE.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2020 7:05:00 PM

Thank you, sweet lady!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/19/2020 7:37:00 AM

An unbelievable pen, Kim! Accurate description..... Of the goofiness going on. God is watching ~ he's always here. Maybe folks might get their heads screwed on if they knew that! Hugs, Panagiota xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2020 8:23:00 AM

Right!