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Maddening Rain

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Pitter patter, pitter patter Telling me that I don’t matter That the storm clouds will not scatter Telling me my heart will shatter Pitter patter, pitter patter Splish splash, splish splash Telling me our dreams will clash That on rocks my love will dash Telling me my heart he’ll gash Splish splash, splish splash Drip drop, drip drop Telling me my love he’ll swap That my heart strings he will crop Telling me my life will stop Drip drop, drip drop September 1, 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2013 4:06:00 PM

hey, you could use this maybe for that one contest on alliteration and assonance? I really enjoyed this one. A clever poem, dearie.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/5/2013 7:23:00 AM

Hi, Andrea....wasn't aware there was such a contest. I'll look it up. Thanks for passing by. Means a great deal to me!!! HUGS!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/4/2013 8:23:00 AM

You inspired a poem Eileen.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/5/2013 7:24:00 AM

BEST NEWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/4/2013 7:43:00 AM

Splish splash I was taken a bath, I pulled the plug and all the sad went down the drain. A very creative piece although very sad. Feel free to use my magic tub.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/5/2013 7:25:00 AM

:) :) :) Down the drain.......where all the sad belongs. Thanks for your kindness.....always always a ray of light.

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/4/2013 4:19:00 AM

Wow, beautifully written poem. An incredible work you have here. Well done.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/5/2013 7:26:00 AM

Jon........thanks ever so much for your wonderful post. It does my heart good.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/3/2013 3:27:00 PM

Drip drop..drip drop...Just dropping in my free time to tell you I love your monorhyme : )

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/5/2013 7:28:00 AM

OH.......Sweet.......I love getting visits from you! :)

Joseph Sergi

Date: 12/3/2013 3:07:00 PM

very well written work always take a chance on love for it is" better to loved and lost then never to have loved at all."

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/5/2013 7:28:00 AM

Yes......that is true indeed. I love that quotation. Thanks for the lovely post.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 12/3/2013 11:02:00 AM

Love this poem. Like acid rain that stings the most

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/5/2013 7:29:00 AM

I love that you love this poem! :) Hey, Justice!!!!