Madame Storm

.                                      She punishes you,
                                With her electric fingers,
                                     Defending herself.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 1:17 PM
I can see her coming down out of the sky. Very descriptive Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
Chircop Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 1:07 PM
she is madam storm-give her the electric chair:)--charma
Fraser Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 2:41 PM
Awesome Haiku Savannah>>James
Lopez Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 8:20 PM
nice write, good luck in the contest!
Leccese Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 3:11 PM
I like how you gave the storm a gender. That is great! Very good flow also. Nate
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