Anisha Dutta Poet Sonnet

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12/10/ 15

First Place

Love Poems Contest by Alexis Y

Mad In Love

Mad in Love 

            Soft ripen fruit tends to grow more soft
      So easy to bite and juice is sweet also 
       Prompt wasp Was stings and sucks also prompt 
      Solo but strong bite makes the hole deep so low

       In haste fruit is eaten and thirst is met in haste
         Pore gets bigger,wasp goes through pore
    Best option to get inside, wasp tries best
         Core is opened and wasp settles in core

    Mad as the wasp, to pierce your heart I am mad
      Sea is your mind with hidden treasure,I will see
    Glad to say' I love you' and you too will be glad
         Me is myself,I will go or you come to me.

    Please honor my passion , please.
    Release your emotion, release.

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Skat A December 17, 2015 at 12:35 PM Anisha, , wonderful win. **SKAT** Anisha Dutta December 18, 2015 at 3:33 AM Thanks SKAT Love. Anisha Dutta

Alexis Y. December 15, 2015 at 12:39 PM Anisha,Thanks for participating in my contest. Congrats on your 1st place win! :-) Alexis Anisha Dutta December 15, 2015 at 12:47 PM Thanks Alexis Y. Best Wishes. Anisha D

John Lawless November 2, 2015 at 7:07 AM Anisha, Shadow Poetry is a website that offers explanation and examples of poetry forms. Howmanysyllables.com is a site that offers grammar, rhyme, and syllable count checks. Anisha Dutta December 15, 2015 at 12:38 PM Thanks John. i will visit the web site. Best Wishes

John Lawless November 1, 2015 at 12:32 PM Anisha, please check the syllable count on your submission using the guidelines for the contest. I have been doing a preliminary check of rhyme and syllable count prior to the closing of the contest. Anisha Dutta November 1, 2015 at 8:07 PM Going to check the syllable count What is shadow poetry? I could not follow.