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Mad As a Hornet

I strike as a hornet. Swear I'll win with this Sonnet. Stripes black and yellow I'm the 'Yellow-Jacket'. Grammar was poor and weak like my zero-budget. With this sonnet I'm mad as a hornet. With rhymes I'm the queen of the wasps. See the way you gasp when your sinking? Its the way you'll bust when you find these words stinging. Hornet and a Bee makes a good paradox. I asked Shakespeare now this poem is as nice as a meat at spur. You have stirred up a hornet's nest. Now with this poem you'll sit-up and rest. Its a powerful insect. In grammar I strike with an impact.

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Skat A

Date: 1/21/2016 10:57:00 PM

hlompho great poem. Enjoyed reading........ SKAT **

Skat A

Date: 11/23/2015 11:02:00 PM

Hlompho, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Guru Mordecai
Date: 11/24/2015 10:28:00 AM

Hi skat...im from S.A ,i am one of Jehovah's witnesses and i love writing not only poems but even short stories,i am 18 years of age,and as you recognised im new on poetry soup...and im on it only for the contests and i'd love to be on the adventute of poetry in having a new experience.