Macular degeneration

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Lately I had been struggling with retinal macular degradation. I am going thru with medical procedures, Hopefully I will be back in three to six months.

Eyes that once beheld the world so clear, Now shadows cloak what was once near. Macula dims, stealing sight's song, Yet hope and courage still stand strong. In fading light, a spirit's might, Sees beauty beyond the shades of night.

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/9/2023 6:00:00 PM

Terrible condition, but lovely poetic words of description, Jay. Your words flowed smoothly as I read your poem today. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/9/2023 1:27:00 PM

A wonderful write. Sorry to hear about your eyes. I will put you on my Soups prayer list. Get well real soon..... Have a great fall day writing away............

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/9/2023 1:19:00 PM

your poem is filled with hope, jay, a testament to an inner strength i don't know if i'd be able to summon in those circumstances. my best wishes to you for a full recovery...