Macromania

Massive feet (are they clown's?) marching along long long motorway. Stepped knee deep malodorous dog gift mocking proboscis. Eyes mega in disgust. Curse macromania jinx. Notes: Macromania is a mania where things seem bigger than they really are. Written 20th April 2017 Entry to "Pleiades M" contest

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/28/2017 8:52:00 AM

Very creative, Mark:) congratulations on your win:)

Mark Martin
Date: 4/29/2017 2:57:00 PM

Thanks Jo! :-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/25/2017 6:50:00 AM

Good one, Mark! Congrats!

Mark Martin
Date: 4/25/2017 4:25:00 PM

Thanks Kim! :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2017 1:53:00 PM

- A great poem on the letter "M" - Congratulations on your winning poem, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Martin
Date: 4/25/2017 4:25:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise! All the best! Mark :-)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/23/2017 7:54:00 AM

Interesting choice of theme and perspective - congrats on your win, Mark.

Mark Martin
Date: 4/25/2017 4:24:00 PM

Thanks Agnes! :-)

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/22/2017 12:40:00 PM

This is a well written, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a beautiful image driven poem. Your word choices make this a very interesting and pleasing read. Emile. #7

Mark Martin
Date: 4/22/2017 2:30:00 PM

Thanks Emile! All the best! Mark :-)

Chris Green

Date: 4/20/2017 1:59:00 PM

Very cool, abstract and creative. Good luck in the contest.

Mark Martin
Date: 4/21/2017 10:01:00 AM

Thanks Chris! :-)