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mackerel mourning haiku

feasting gulls gather on a lip of cockled sand mackerel mourning

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Date: 2/8/2011 12:21:00 PM
The mackerel is an underappreciated fish, And though that one is no more, you have given it eternal life with your haiku.
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Date: 2/8/2011 3:22:00 AM
Very descriptive haiku. Good work.
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