Mackerel Mourning Haiku

feasting gulls gather
on a lip of cockled sand
mackerel mourning
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Inka Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 12:21 PM
The mackerel is an underappreciated fish, And though that one is no more, you have given it eternal life with your haiku.
Pettit Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 3:22 AM
Very descriptive haiku. Good work.
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