"mack"

My "mack"
worked.
I don't "mack"
I chat.
Establish communication.
Ask questions,
Leading questions, 
enter the mind.
It is not hard, I find.

She 
opened herself up
to me.
free from inhibition.
comfortable in that position.
I fed to her intuitions.

I notice things:
like the tattoo 
on her lower back.
The way she sings to herself
to rhythm and blues.

Confident & cute!!


Jared Pickett
9/20/09
Asavvy1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 5, 2009 at 10:38 PM
lol! I love this one my friend, so playful! Delightful reading you!
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September 22, 2009 at 6:21 AM
Wanna see this tattoo Jared, another wonderful poem and delight from your pen>>James
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September 21, 2009 at 7:50 PM
A Very Intuitive Poem. The art of meaningful conversation is very important to connect... Great Write MoonBee
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September 21, 2009 at 4:27 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen.I like the line "establish communication". Keep writing. Sara
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September 21, 2009 at 4:21 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Jared. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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September 20, 2009 at 5:17 AM
sweetly visceral!...cool!...jim
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September 19, 2009 at 9:34 PM
Nice work Jared, the last stanza was full of nice observations...
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