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"mack"

My "mack" worked. I don't "mack" I chat. Establish communication. Ask questions, Leading questions, enter the mind. It is not hard, I find. She opened herself up to me. free from inhibition. comfortable in that position. I fed to her intuitions. I notice things: like the tattoo on her lower back. The way she sings to herself to rhythm and blues. Confident & cute!! Jared Pickett 9/20/09 Asavvy1

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Date: 10/5/2009 10:38:00 PM
lol! I love this one my friend, so playful! Delightful reading you!
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Date: 9/22/2009 6:21:00 AM
Wanna see this tattoo Jared, another wonderful poem and delight from your pen>>James
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Date: 9/21/2009 7:50:00 PM
A Very Intuitive Poem. The art of meaningful conversation is very important to connect... Great Write MoonBee
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Date: 9/21/2009 4:27:00 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen.I like the line "establish communication". Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/21/2009 4:21:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Jared. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2009 5:17:00 AM
sweetly visceral!...cool!...jim
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Date: 9/19/2009 9:34:00 PM
Nice work Jared, the last stanza was full of nice observations...
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