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Machine Guns

Machine Guns Allied forces lie down flat. Strong, brave, ready for combat. Hush. Hear that. Rat-a-tat-tat. Armed, they work without brickbat. Dug-in. Stressed in metal hat. Distant screams Rat-a-tat-tat. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 26, 2010 Poetic form: Englyn Poetic Form: Englyn Milwr (The Soldier’s Englyn) REFERENCES follow: http://blogs.warwick.ac.uk/zoebrigley/entry/the_measures_of_1/ http://jpicforum.info/types-of-poetry/englyn-milwr-680.html

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Date: 1/26/2010 3:42:00 PM
How unique Dane Ann.. title compliments the words and flow.. great job ... luv your last lines on each verse .. ingenious... luv.. Linda-Marie
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