Machi Fish

No water
only sky
fills this fish's brain.

No water
but a longing to fly
is in this fish's body.

Into the brimming ocean
she is emptying herself
incessantly, over centuries.

She passes by
small fish, big fish.
Lost in thought, this fish
asks herself oh,
where did your ocean
go?

The swimming fish
repeats this question
as if it were a prayer-mantra.
The fish does not know
that sky has filled her brain

that the skull-smashing ritual
has already begun
inside her.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Salehi Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 1:09 AM
Hi Gagan The poem is nice, but it is not Ghazal. This is Google's definition of Ghazal" a lyric poem with a fixed number of verses and a repeated rhyme, typically on the theme of love, and normally set to music."
Tidd Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 10:23 AM
Intriguing. Obviously outside of my reference points. Am curious. First thing I thought of was a cloud.
Kendrick Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 5:15 PM
Interesting work..I wonder exactly the interpertation of this one...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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