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Macabre Can-Can

the chemo…the cancer…the fungus,
bowel obstruction, pneumonia…
all joined hands, 
in a macabre can-can to kill her.

5/25/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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May 30, 2022 at 5:22 PM
Ooohoo! What a nightmare! My sister died from cancer and it was not nice. Good write though. God Bless and I hope this isn't about you or anyone you know. JB
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 4:30 AM
I am so sorry, Judy. This one was my mom’s cancer nightmare. Hugs ~ Kim
Kiser Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 2:14 PM
Scary, what a horrible predicament; well penned of this horror.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 4:33 AM
Thank you, M.L.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 4:30 AM
Thank you, M.L.
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 9:17 AM
oh my, some people just get hit way too hard!! Great imagery for this topic, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 4:34 PM
Thanks, Andrea
Wolf Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 7:50 PM
Grisly. Penetrates me to the bone.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 8:53 PM
Yes, it is and true.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 3:58 AM
A horrific painful experience, dearest Kim. I do not wish anyone to go through this! God bless you and keep you healthy!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 3:50 PM
Thank you, dear one. Unfortunately my mother died this way :(
Horsman Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 10:52 PM
It seems to be the norm now a days Kim, so hard getting use to it'. Great poem and message,
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 3:51 PM
For sure. Kick cancer down the street, over the cliff, into the abyss…and don’t you come back will be the echo…
Hawkins Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 10:05 PM
A very deplorable state of affairs, indeed.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 3:52 PM
Indeed, Shirley!
Cunningham Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 10:47 AM
Sadly the immune system unable to fight off the invaders. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 1:11 PM
Of course no immunotherapy was introduced…just stick to the plan and kill the patient…oh and collect the money. A sad business! Thanks, Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 7:57 AM
This is sadly what happened to my mother also. 11 Chemo treatments later....
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 1:12 PM
But they got their money. What if they had to cure the patient first..ah ah…that’s an idea. Thanks, Caren!
M  Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 7:03 AM
Wow Kim that’s powerful! Great poem! Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 1:12 PM
Thanks, Deb
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