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Mable and Gable

I know a country gal named Mable She is dating her neighbour Gable They want to go to a show That is in a very small town All the traffic was very slow The wind was blowing snow They really did not know If they were unable To get to the show The drive to the town was slow

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Alfred Berggren

Date: 7/29/2017 12:58:00 PM

I hope they got there and the show was really great.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/29/2017 6:01:00 PM

Yes they got there and the show was really great. They had aslow drive becuse the weather was bad. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/14/2017 11:00:00 PM

Nice rhymes in this laid back poem, Darlene. I like the vibe of this poem, probably because I'm a city boy w/a pastoral soul. Lovely poem. Peace and joy to you.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/29/2017 6:04:00 PM

Thank you Freddie,this was a fun poem to write. I am a city girl to.Yet I do like the country. I did live in at town that I enjoyed. Now must adjust to the city.Love and hugs my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2017 6:18:00 PM

cute rhyme, DArlene. I enjoyed this.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/29/2017 6:14:00 PM

Hello Andrea I had fun to write this poem. I miss not living in a small town. Have a good evening my friend.

Old Buck

Date: 2/10/2017 2:33:00 PM

Darlene: Years ago, I would put chains on my car to get over to see my sweetheart, who is now my wife. She would tell you, I got rid of those chains years ago and now won't leave the house unless we are out of root beer or cheese curds. Thanks for sharing your work with all of us on the soup. oldbuck

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/29/2017 6:21:00 PM

Hello Old Buck,you and your wife have a strong bond which is hard to find,the year before he passed he cheated on me, and I never knew the reason why. This pain is dying out now. Which is good for me. Have a nice evening my friend.