Mabel

The crisp cool breeze
helped the sailboat to glide,
like a swan on a lake,
or the glory of a kite.

The shiny exterior
shone pearlescent white,
the gold, christened lettering,
gloriously reflecting the light.

Newly purchased, fridge stocked,
husband proudly at the wheel,
his wife dressed in stripes,
below, fussing about their meals.

This was their retirement,
the life they had planned,
and then without warning,
she felt dizzy; she could not stand.

As she gasped for air
and tried to call out his name,
her husband stood proudly,
planning his wife's life long dream.

As she stumbled and fell,
her head hit the table,
her husband oblivious
he was mapping their course,
deep in thought; for his beautiful wife; Mabel.

Her dream was to voyage
the open blue seas,
like two peas in a pod,
his Mabel, the queen bee.

As she lay motionless,
no sound could be heard,
but the lull of the waves
and sweet song of the birds.

As the husband took a step
down the galley below,
all he saw was his Mabel,
clutching her ring; eyes closed.

He gently and lovingly
picked her up with care,
and he took his wife, Mabel
and collapsed in their chair.

He rocked her and cried
my Mabel, my love,
you are my joy, my life,
as he released her to the sun.

He whispered a note
of her favourite tune,
as he took off his ring
and gently put it with hers.

Mabel, my love,
we will never be apart,
for the vows that we spoke,
are forever in our hearts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 12:13 AM
Maybe he will join her soon in the afterlife. So sad Lynn. Often couples who have been together many years tend to depart near the same time. Lovely but sad poem. : )
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 9:07 PM
A sad and touching poem here, Lynn. You are quite good as a storyteller!! By the way, my walnut tree is looking pitiful at the moment. I believe I bought it in April last year when it had very few leaves on it. HOpefully by May it will have more leaves like before but even better!
Callus Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 9:06 AM
How very sad and touching this narrative is, Lynn! Yet, there is also a glow that is emitted from the couple's strong, undying love! Regards // paul
Inman Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Lynn, a lovely write, if only life was so straight forward, if only we could find that special someone who we could always count on, who would always be there, without the sorrow of searching and knowing that you will always be loved.
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