Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Free verse

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M O U N T a I N S - the Choka Style

~ Mountains ~ 
(Double Choka) 


Over the mountains 
Sun shines in all its splendor 
Beautiful trees stand out tall 
Birds assemble there 
Eagles soar right to the top 
Wild flowers covers the ground 

Blue mountains stand grand 
Deers and bears roam all around 
Eyes can't get enough nice scene 
All trees seem to glow 
You can feel God's loving touch 
Breathe in enjoy all the view. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2015


July.24.2017



“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” 
- Mark Twain- 


~ Author's Notes : 

The " Choka " is  a Japanese poetry form or style.

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Heidi Sands July 24, 2017 at 3:49 PM I love this poem Dorian.!! and I love the mountains. This reminds me of where I live and I am saving as a favorite. Thank you so much :) Dorian Petersen Potter July 24, 2017 at 4:07 PM Thank you ever so kindly Heidi, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Choka Mountain poem.Deeply appreciated it , the fav and all!:))You're so kind.So happy you liked it ! Very lucky you living so close to very beautiful and precious mountains and nature!:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D