Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Free verse

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M O U N T a I N S - the Choka Style

~Mountains~ 
(Double Choka) 


Over the mountains 
Sun shines in all its splendor 
Beautiful trees stand out tall 
Birds assemble there 
Eagles soar right to the top 
Wild flowers covers the ground 

Blue mountains stand grand 
Deers and bears roam all around 
Eyes can't get enough nice scene 
All trees seem to glow 
You can feel God's loving touch 
Breathe in enjoy all the view. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2015


February.11.2017



“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” 
- Mark Twain- 


~ Author's Notes : 

The " Choka " is  a Japanese poetry form or style.

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Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2017 at 12:40 PM - A beautiful picture you have painted with your pen, Dorian - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Dorian Petersen Potter February 12, 2017 at 4:07 PM Thank you ever so kindly, Anne-Lise , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem:)Deeply appreciate it all dear friend and the 7 also.I'm so glad you liked this one.Sending you always my love n' prayers:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs!D