M&M Cookies

First we mix up all the dough
Mix it till it’s smooth
Mix in the chocolate chips 
Cooking in a groove 
Delicious cookies
Made by us
Love!


If your wondering what
this has to do with M&M
it is for Me & Michaela
my daughter.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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K. Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 1:05 AM
A very cute poem! And it sure sounds yummy ;) that's just so wonderful, baking with your daughter :)
Spence Sr Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 1:30 PM
Hey, Michael this is great. By now your daughter must be teaching you how to cook. LOL!!! I love it. Great job! ~Joseph
Ahmad Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 11:53 PM
Yummy... well written.
Loving Iii Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 6:05 PM
cute. a perfect receipe for an unspoilable date. john
Mc Avatar
March 22, 2009 at 2:45 PM
so clever and precious too! and thanks Mike!
Moreno Avatar
March 20, 2009 at 12:09 AM
Delicious write Michael. I left you some soup mail. Best of luck in the contest...Raul
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March 17, 2009 at 4:10 PM
What a nice dedication to your time together. Sounds like a wonderful way to share some family time. Blessings to you for sharing your poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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March 15, 2009 at 1:07 PM
Hello Mike, this is excellent; however you should go back and count the syllables. Use the syllable checker online if possible. The count is 7/5/7/5/5/3/1/. Great job! ~Joseph
Wood Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 1:07 PM
Yeah, yummy! Again you share a sweet bit of your life through your poetic talent. Thanks.
Strand Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 1:30 AM
Nice recipe Michael.Thank you for your blog comment today Rgds Brian
Parish Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 5:44 PM
Now you're cookin'....lol. Love the write Michael
Mckenzie Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 11:23 AM
Very sweet Very well done Michael it reminds me of my daughter when she and I would make cookies! Laura :) I hope this one is in my contest??
P. Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 8:17 AM
so cute! lovely write! ~ Arany
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March 13, 2009 at 8:10 AM
Sweeter than chocolate is this poem! Nicely done, Michael! (save me a cookie please!)...love, Carrie
Winter Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 6:25 AM
Aww is so right. Sweet with double meaning! Just precious Michael. Love, Shar
Christian Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 4:16 AM
aww so beautiful, I am hungry now LOL, i love the sweet sound of this poem and a great special time of bonding, there is no greater love than The Fathers Love, God bles you from diane
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March 12, 2009 at 11:17 PM
Sounds yummy, I like the M & M - and the little rhyme here...This is a very sweet and special treat made by you and your daughter..Making cookies is great but when you are making them with someone you love, it's a lot of fun....I love making cookies with my daughter, it's a special treat for us both...Great Epulaeryu!! I might have to give this form a try myself..GB YF4L Tyesha
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