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Lying On the Floor of My Treehouse

I am an eleven-year-old giant, lying on the floor of my treehouse. The cottonwood trees have a smell you cannot get anywhere else. They cherish our time together; I know because I am loved here. My books are stacked up next to me. I have a pillow. It’s getting dusty. Lack of excitement about this missive leads my eyes to stray. I watch an ant crawling across the floor in front of me I could smash him but I do not. His bold big blackness fascinates me. He is larger than other ants, and he is carrying a cracker crumb. I eat crackers and butter up here, not realizing who else benefits. An angry voice pierces the day; Mrs. Rutherford is yelling at her mate. He pokes his head out, but does not reply. He is terrified of her. So many of us are. I duck down, wondering if she has seen me. Doubtful, she is a focused woman, and Mr. R. is getting her mind. A tittering giggle floats up. Patty from across the street has a beau. That weirdo is over there. I shut this book and open another one. The library lets me take out seven each day.

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Date: 11/8/2021 1:56:00 PM
You, Caren, are so worth the read. Like watching a movie! Love it!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/8/2021 2:08:00 PM
Thank you kindly Kim!
Date: 11/7/2021 7:54:00 PM
And thus, you have learned about you need to know about what is going on in your neighborhood. Love tree houses!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/8/2021 2:09:00 PM
Me too; it was my go-to-spot.
Date: 11/7/2021 5:58:00 PM
A tree house is a great place to see and hear things that others can't. Also a lovely retreat to go to when you need to be alone.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/8/2021 2:09:00 PM
I learned more about psychology in that treehouse than I ever learned in a class.

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