Panagiota Romios Poet Senryu

Lustrous Being, You

                Fall into cool waters.
                Like a leaf, nature's daughter.
                God's floating luster.


               

                          3/23/2021
                               ~1~

                        Rhymed Senryu
    

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Robert Pettit March 23, 2021 at 5:16 PM A short and very sweet write. Panagiota Romios March 23, 2021 at 5:18 PM Thank you Ronert,, Hugs Pamgie xx

Darlene De Beaulieu March 23, 2021 at 11:59 AM Hello Panagiota, I like the way you expressed yourself in this poem. Hugs Darlene xx Panagiota Romios March 23, 2021 at 1:00 PM Hi Darlene..I agree with you. I felt so peaceful after writing this. Thank you my friend, Hugs Pangie xo

Regina Mcintosh March 23, 2021 at 6:23 AM Love this.. it's so dreamy and beautiful. God bless you. Love, Gina Panagiota Romios March 23, 2021 at 11:29 AM Hello, Regina! I soooo agree with you! To God be the Glory! Pangie xx

Tom Cunningham March 23, 2021 at 5:01 AM Lovely image Pangie, I can see the leaf floating away. Tom Panagiota Romios March 23, 2021 at 11:27 AM Hi Tom...there is something magical to me about leaves and water. Such peace! Thank you Pangie

Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2021 at 2:30 AM - Beautifully written, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Panagiota Romios March 23, 2021 at 11:24 AM Hi Anne-Lise. Thank you so very much! Hugs, Pangie xx