Lustrous Being, You

Fall into cool waters. Like a leaf, nature's daughter. God's floating luster. 3/23/2021 ~1~ Rhymed Senryu

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Robert Pettit

Date: 3/23/2021 5:16:00 PM

A short and very sweet write.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/23/2021 5:18:00 PM

Thank you Ronert,, Hugs Pamgie xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/23/2021 11:59:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, I like the way you expressed yourself in this poem. Hugs Darlene xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/23/2021 1:00:00 PM

Hi Darlene..I agree with you. I felt so peaceful after writing this. Thank you my friend, Hugs Pangie xo

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/23/2021 6:23:00 AM

Love this.. it's so dreamy and beautiful. God bless you. Love, Gina

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/23/2021 11:29:00 AM

Hello, Regina! I soooo agree with you! To God be the Glory! Pangie xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/23/2021 5:01:00 AM

Lovely image Pangie, I can see the leaf floating away. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/23/2021 11:27:00 AM

Hi Tom...there is something magical to me about leaves and water. Such peace! Thank you Pangie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/23/2021 2:30:00 AM

- Beautifully written, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/23/2021 11:24:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise. Thank you so very much! Hugs, Pangie xx