Lusting

L onging to have you
U tterly given over to desire
S enses heightened whenever you’re close
T asting the forbidden fruit
I ndulging in mindless fantasies
N ot remembering how to breathe
G rateful for every second you’re near
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 2:22 PM
Another super poem to grace my eyes, golly am i sure glad i clicked on your name, amazing write, James
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April 19, 2009 at 11:16 AM
Wow, It almost sounds like love, too. Hand in hand, they're wonderful, don't you think. this is a beautiful acrostic. Keep writing. Thanks for you comment on my poem. God Bless you, Dane
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April 18, 2009 at 9:01 PM
'...not remembering how to breath!' Yep... that does it! Very well done Kat! Best wishes, Keith
Anderson Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 7:40 PM
now you know i'm loving this right? encore! encore! your fantastic, kat. love, b
Baez Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 8:08 AM
"Tasting the forbidden fruit".....NICE!, you made my mouth water : )!
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