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Lusting

L onging to have you U tterly given over to desire S enses heightened whenever you’re close T asting the forbidden fruit I ndulging in mindless fantasies N ot remembering how to breathe G rateful for every second you’re near

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/26/2009 2:22:00 PM
Another super poem to grace my eyes, golly am i sure glad i clicked on your name, amazing write, James
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Date: 4/19/2009 11:16:00 AM
Wow, It almost sounds like love, too. Hand in hand, they're wonderful, don't you think. this is a beautiful acrostic. Keep writing. Thanks for you comment on my poem. God Bless you, Dane
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Date: 4/18/2009 9:01:00 PM
'...not remembering how to breath!' Yep... that does it! Very well done Kat! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/18/2009 7:40:00 PM
now you know i'm loving this right? encore! encore! your fantastic, kat. love, b
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Date: 4/18/2009 8:08:00 AM
"Tasting the forbidden fruit".....NICE!, you made my mouth water : )!
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