Seren Roberts Poet Sijo

Lust Or Love- Summer Love Contest

Let us prove to each other,  how much, we really care, 
Heard these words before, usually means, is wanting to make love
Cannot remove a name from a tattoo, when mind is changed


Penned 03/06/2014

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Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2014 at 10:36 PM congrats on your win, Seren. Always good to see you here on a winners' list.

Poet Destroyer A July 3, 2014 at 11:41 AM sweet win..PD

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 3, 2014 at 10:57 AM Brilliant write Seren ! It comes too easy to u ,, great thot flow,, I m still on a learning,, congrats on win !

Dr.Ram Mehta July 3, 2014 at 6:24 AM Love alone cannot exists but with lust, Seren, congrats on the win Seren Roberts July 3, 2014 at 9:35 AM Thanks Ram ...Seren

Pandita Sietesantos July 2, 2014 at 4:13 PM Hi Seren, congratulations on a well-deserved fine win! Beautiful write! Kindest regards. Seren Roberts July 3, 2014 at 9:36 AM Pandita ,many thanks ...Seren

Andrea Dietrich June 4, 2014 at 3:29 PM Love the thinking behind this one. Hmmm, is there a new contest afoot? I am seeing more than one lust/love poems here today!! Seren Roberts June 5, 2014 at 12:27 AM Don't know Andrea, ...thanks for stopping by ...Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta June 4, 2014 at 5:40 AM Very deep and thought provoking, wit and humor sparsely seen,Seren Seren Roberts June 4, 2014 at 6:31 AM thanks Ram. is it a true sijo? I entered it for the contest and then withdrew it,cos I am not sure if I did it right....Seren