Lust

Center of gravity for all his wildest fantasies is glittering in her eyes.

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/6/2017 2:12:00 AM

congrats on your nice poem :)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/7/2017 8:15:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind applause, Debbie!! *^_^*

Dean Wood

Date: 7/31/2017 9:50:00 AM

Congratulations Teddy!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/1/2017 4:39:00 PM

Thank you so much, Dean!! :-)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/30/2017 9:26:00 PM

I missed this! It is superb! Congratulations on your third placement Teddy!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/1/2017 4:39:00 PM

Thank you for your kind applause, Connie!! *^_^*

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/29/2017 10:11:00 PM

Gorgeous :) Congratulations! xomo

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/1/2017 4:38:00 PM

Thank you so much for your warm applause, Maureen!! *^_^*

Eve Roper

Date: 7/29/2017 10:00:00 AM

awesome write., Teddy,. congratulations on your win :) ~*

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/1/2017 4:37:00 PM

Hi, Eve. Thank you so much for enjoying and applauding my work!! *^_^*

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/29/2017 8:36:00 AM

Hi Teddy, fantastic imagery. Congrats on your win! :)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/1/2017 4:35:00 PM

Thank you so much, Ashley!! I really appreciate it!! *^_^*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2017 6:09:00 PM

Very nice, Teddy!! I have one ready to post but it might be too common!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/28/2017 2:58:00 AM

Hi, Andrea. I hope I didn't hack into your mind, lolest. Just post it! ;-) Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my work! *^_^*