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Lust

A fallen angel walked one shady path where the demon creeps written from the blood of man in the darkened chambers deep A dark need that feeds the demon Like a wolf wears a mask Dressed as a sheep, a lamb to the slaughter In evil her will treads Upon his ground One of the seven Sins of man fallen grace One time angel Upon the face of lust Crave the pain a snake without soul bites the deepest flesh Savoring the ache Deep within Darkened clouds upon my earths sky, raining black poison Thundering roars Opening hell Temptation in life's orchard forbidden fruit Now close the door It is here you see the face Twisted in all its guilt in the age of centuries Screaming nightmares in thundering voices From hell I speak in you a black heart torn in shreds the serpent deceiver Lust is the demon In you fallen angel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/24/2015 8:45:00 AM
lust>>a dark word; but not black; for I see black as beautiful :))) Awesome write..thanks for the marvelous poem :)
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Date: 6/12/2015 1:27:00 AM
Liam, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 10/20/2013 12:43:00 PM
Liam This is a deep and powerful piece of writing. Full of heart and soul taking the reader on the journey that is in your mind. Nice job
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Date: 9/9/2013 10:23:00 PM
I love the 4th and 7th line the best. But it is all quite amazing. A very thought-provoking piece. Enjoying some of your older posted pieces here. Always, Laura
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/13/2013 10:38:00 AM
THANK YOU LAURA YOUR SO SWEET DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/3/2013 2:12:00 PM
Wow! A stunning piece of poetry you wrote here, Liam! I can see the similarity in this poem compared to mine. So well done!....Thanks very much for all of your sweet comments on my work! Sorry that I couldn't reply yesterday....By the way, I have added you to my favorite poets list!
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Date: 8/8/2013 12:40:00 PM
very powerful poem Liam keep writing Shadow x smiles
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/16/2013 3:23:00 PM
thank you ever so much linda deeply appreciated

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