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Lust


love
          l a c k s
lust
 
	
For	In Just A Few Words, Joseph May
14.07.2021
2nd place

10th gradeloveverse

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Howard Kerr

July 21, 2021 at 5:44 AM

Congratulations on your win. Howard

Howard Kerr

July 21, 2021 at 5:43 AM

Congratulations on your win. Howard

Beata Agustin

July 19, 2021 at 7:38 PM

Congrats. Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Kim Merryman

July 18, 2021 at 1:43 PM

There is definitely a difference between the two. Good one, Rama! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May

July 18, 2021 at 4:11 AM

Very nicely penned Rama, Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith

July 17, 2021 at 2:12 PM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!! Three powerful words and write. Love is God. Lust is man. Blessing today/weekend............

Marilene Evans

July 17, 2021 at 10:33 AM

Congrats, Rama. Not sure on that one. As long us its between the couple and no outsiders, I think it's OK.

Andrea Dietrich

July 17, 2021 at 10:01 AM

hmmm, it CAN, that is for sure!!! Enjoyed this one. Congrats, Rama

Sotto Poet

July 17, 2021 at 9:26 AM

Congratulations on your contest win, Rama. You wrote a superb poem.

Line Gauthier

July 17, 2021 at 5:58 AM

good luck debating that one ~ lol

Christuraj Alex

July 17, 2021 at 5:50 AM

Though, as Kim has mentioned, the subject is debatable, the writing is very beautiful.

Kim Rodrigues

July 15, 2021 at 12:23 PM

Love is not lackluster either. Just saying. You have started a fire of conversation;)

Michelle Faulkner

July 14, 2021 at 2:49 PM

I get it, lust alone is not about love, and love is more of a soulful connection, very creative take on the contest!

Richard Lamoureux

July 14, 2021 at 5:08 AM

Do you think so? I have been with my wife for 29 years and a healthy amount of lust has kept the heat and passion in our relationship. It’s amazing how you created contemplation with so few words. Thanks as well for your visit.

Rama Balasubramanian

July 14, 2021 at 5:29 AM

Both are different. Lust is selfish physical desire. Love is selfless service.

Lust

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