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Lust

love l a c k s lust For In Just A Few Words, Joseph May 14.07.2021 2nd place

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Howard Kerr

Date: 7/21/2021 5:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Howard

Howard Kerr

Date: 7/21/2021 5:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Howard

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/19/2021 7:38:00 PM

Congrats. Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/18/2021 1:43:00 PM

There is definitely a difference between the two. Good one, Rama! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May

Date: 7/18/2021 4:11:00 AM

Very nicely penned Rama, Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/17/2021 2:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!! Three powerful words and write. Love is God. Lust is man. Blessing today/weekend............

Marilene Evans

Date: 7/17/2021 10:33:00 AM

Congrats, Rama. Not sure on that one. As long us its between the couple and no outsiders, I think it's OK.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2021 10:01:00 AM

hmmm, it CAN, that is for sure!!! Enjoyed this one. Congrats, Rama

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/17/2021 9:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your contest win, Rama. You wrote a superb poem.

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/17/2021 5:58:00 AM

good luck debating that one ~ lol

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/17/2021 5:50:00 AM

Though, as Kim has mentioned, the subject is debatable, the writing is very beautiful.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/15/2021 12:23:00 PM

Love is not lackluster either. Just saying. You have started a fire of conversation;)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/14/2021 2:49:00 PM

I get it, lust alone is not about love, and love is more of a soulful connection, very creative take on the contest!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/14/2021 5:08:00 AM

Do you think so? I have been with my wife for 29 years and a healthy amount of lust has kept the heat and passion in our relationship. It’s amazing how you created contemplation with so few words. Thanks as well for your visit.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 7/14/2021 5:29:00 AM

Both are different. Lust is selfish physical desire. Love is selfless service.