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Lush Summer

Splendor is the day,
Its’ moments filled with color;
A season so green.

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Elizabeth Neal

March 24, 2009 at 7:31 PM

Lush it is, lovely haiku. Keep up the good job. Love E.

Tyler Martin

March 23, 2009 at 11:24 PM

You have a nice hand at writing haiku's

Frank F. Atanacio

March 7, 2009 at 9:01 AM

and I can't wait!

Iolanda Scripca

March 5, 2009 at 9:07 PM

I'm in California. I know what you are talking about..."moments full of color". Thanks for your comment on my "Del Mar Fair". I couldn't believe they REALLY dip seahorses in gold for souveneirs

Lena Townsend

March 5, 2009 at 7:07 PM

Oh, though it is not summer the weather was this way in Kansas today. 75 degrees and the sun shining, a splended day and the green was starting to show through the yellowed grass left on the lawns in winters death. I am so glad to have had a day like this it seems it has been so long. Funny you described it so perfectly. Smiles from Lolita

Carrie Richards

March 5, 2009 at 5:26 PM

This makes me long for a full day of sunshine. Nicely done, Raul ! Carrie

Sharon Winter

March 5, 2009 at 4:45 PM

Rich in imagery, bursting with summer. Love it. Well done. Love, Shar

Tyesha Ehigiator

March 5, 2009 at 4:37 PM

Very lovely Raul, I can't wait to feel that warm sun shining down upon my face...and all the beautiful flower buds bursting into life..Great Job.. I left you some soup mail..God Bless *Tyesha