Lush Summer

Splendor is the day,
Its’ moments filled with color;
A season so green.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/24/2009 7:31:00 PM
Lush it is, lovely haiku. Keep up the good job. Love E.
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Date: 3/23/2009 11:24:00 PM
You have a nice hand at writing haiku's
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Date: 3/7/2009 9:01:00 AM
and I can't wait!
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Date: 3/5/2009 9:07:00 PM
I'm in California. I know what you are talking about..."moments full of color". Thanks for your comment on my "Del Mar Fair". I couldn't believe they REALLY dip seahorses in gold for souveneirs
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Date: 3/5/2009 7:07:00 PM
Oh, though it is not summer the weather was this way in Kansas today. 75 degrees and the sun shining, a splended day and the green was starting to show through the yellowed grass left on the lawns in winters death. I am so glad to have had a day like this it seems it has been so long. Funny you described it so perfectly. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/5/2009 5:26:00 PM
This makes me long for a full day of sunshine. Nicely done, Raul ! Carrie
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Date: 3/5/2009 4:45:00 PM
Rich in imagery, bursting with summer. Love it. Well done. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/5/2009 4:37:00 PM
Very lovely Raul, I can't wait to feel that warm sun shining down upon my face...and all the beautiful flower buds bursting into life..Great Job.. I left you some soup mail..God Bless *Tyesha
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Date: 3/5/2009 4:18:00 PM
This is splendid Raul..I can't wait. BG
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Date: 3/5/2009 4:15:00 PM
Okay lets just say Im looking forward to warmer weather not hot like Chris. Nice job kiddo.
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Date: 3/5/2009 4:12:00 PM
That is beautiful brother and I look forward to long hot days of summer..bring it on!
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