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Lush Sanctuary

Beyond this door A lush universe A burst of awesomeness An exotic tropical world Where rain droplets hover For orchid blooms high and low A proliferation of vivid blossoms Each unique intricate works of art In every colour of the rainbow Releasing tropical assailant scents Lavish greenhouse garden A most spiritual sanctuary As precious as admittance to the Creator’s private chamber Just a taste of what heaven is like AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on August 27, 2018

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Date: 8/28/2018 9:18:00 PM
A beautiful vision of heaven, Line. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/28/2018 3:33:00 PM
very nice!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/28/2018 7:12:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit, Timothy.
Date: 8/28/2018 4:29:00 AM
What a beautiful poem this is, describing heaven so well, Line. Nice.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/28/2018 2:32:00 PM
Thanks, Caren, for your lovely visit and comment.

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