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"Lush Ocean" I wade out into you embrace the cool of you to die a little death immersed in the ocean that is you, drowning in the indigo velvet of your copulating embrace red becomes you as your waves crest into and over me I draw you into me far from our other worlds where dissonant siren voices drown (LadyLabyrinth / 2022) “Ocean” / Lush https://youtu.be/nDDkpuQMBJ8 LYRICS/ “Ocean”, Lush-ocean https://genius.com/Lush-ocean-lyrics

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Date: 10/7/2022 12:35:00 PM
Your metaphorical 'lush ocean' is beautiful and sensuous, Lady L., so are th eimages and music accompanying it. ~ Regards // paul
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/7/2022 4:46:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 10/7/2022 10:48:00 AM
Wave upon wave exploding upon the pristine shores
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/7/2022 4:50:00 PM
https://youtu.be/0g3_GkNDyd4
Date: 10/6/2022 8:31:00 PM
Twin-flaming or cosmic orgy?
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Becky Forbes
Date: 10/7/2022 1:03:00 AM
Ohhhhh... ha! delightful :-)
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/6/2022 8:38:00 PM
Red.
Date: 10/6/2022 8:18:00 PM
Ah! Beautiful!
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/6/2022 8:39:00 PM
and maybe a bit of indigo.

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