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Lush Lovely Temptation

Lush
                                             virgin
                                           succulent
                                         exceedingly
                                              ripe
          




Written on 4/7/2017

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Miraj Raha

Date: 4/21/2017 5:05:00 AM

almost to melt in the mouth,Laura.

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/21/2017 8:56:00 AM

Thanks, Miraj. :)

John Michaels

Date: 4/14/2017 4:30:00 AM

Swinging back 'round again to congratulate you on your win! Regards, John.

Constance La France

Date: 4/12/2017 1:46:00 PM

Laura congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Lanterne.

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/10/2017 11:16:00 AM

This poem is pure fantasy and flows off the tongue like syrup while leaving a sweet after taste....delicious! Emile.

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/10/2017 10:35:00 PM

Thanks, Emile! I'm so glad you liked my very short (but descriptive) poem. :)

John Michaels

Date: 4/9/2017 12:27:00 PM

Oooh, very risque! Lovely write, Laura. Kudos for finding a suitable word to link back to "Lush" - I gave up and went for the Labyrinth instead :). Best of luck for the contest!

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/9/2017 1:58:00 PM

Thanks, John...I actually looked up synonyms for lush and saw "ripe"!