Laura Leiser Poet Lanterne

Lush Lovely Temptation

Lush
                                             virgin
                                           succulent
                                         exceedingly
                                              ripe
          




Written on 4/7/2017

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Miraj Raha April 21, 2017 at 5:05 AM almost to melt in the mouth,Laura. Laura Leiser April 21, 2017 at 8:56 AM Thanks, Miraj. :)

John Michaels April 14, 2017 at 4:30 AM Swinging back 'round again to congratulate you on your win! Regards, John.

Constance La France April 12, 2017 at 1:46 PM Laura congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Lanterne.

Emile Pinet April 10, 2017 at 11:16 AM This poem is pure fantasy and flows off the tongue like syrup while leaving a sweet after taste....delicious! Emile. Laura Leiser April 10, 2017 at 10:35 PM Thanks, Emile! I'm so glad you liked my very short (but descriptive) poem. :)

John Michaels April 9, 2017 at 12:27 PM Oooh, very risque! Lovely write, Laura. Kudos for finding a suitable word to link back to "Lush" - I gave up and went for the Labyrinth instead :). Best of luck for the contest! Laura Leiser April 9, 2017 at 1:58 PM Thanks, John...I actually looked up synonyms for lush and saw "ripe"!

Richard Lamoureux April 9, 2017 at 8:58 AM Otherwise known as a 40 year old virgin. Sorry couldn't resist. I rate a 7, well done. Laura Leiser April 9, 2017 at 9:42 AM Hahaaa, very clever, Richard :) Definitely another way to look at this!!!

Jan Allison April 8, 2017 at 2:15 PM ooohhh sexy lanterne Laura - good luck:-) hugs jan xx Laura Leiser April 8, 2017 at 6:59 PM Thanks, Jan. :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 7, 2017 at 10:39 PM Excellent pen! Sexy 7 ;) Laura Leiser April 7, 2017 at 11:04 PM Thanks, Maureen :)

Kim Rodrigues April 7, 2017 at 8:51 PM Very nice! Laura Leiser April 7, 2017 at 11:04 PM Thanks, Kim. :)

Poetprentice Dupins April 7, 2017 at 7:12 PM Ah yes, the temptation of a Georgia peach on a hot, sultry, summer night...:) Excellent lanterne! Laura Leiser April 7, 2017 at 7:52 PM Thanks! So true. :)