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Lush Lovely Temptation

Lush virgin succulent exceedingly ripe Written on 4/7/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Miraj Raha
Date: 4/21/2017 5:05:00 AM
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almost to melt in the mouth,Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/21/2017 8:56:00 AM
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Thanks, Miraj. :)
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John Michaels
Date: 4/14/2017 4:30:00 AM
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Swinging back 'round again to congratulate you on your win! Regards, John.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2017 1:46:00 PM
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Laura congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Lanterne.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/10/2017 5:54:00 PM
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Hi Laura, few words covers a lot , very nice
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/10/2017 10:36:00 PM
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Thanks so much, Niall! So glad you liked it. :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/10/2017 11:16:00 AM
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This poem is pure fantasy and flows off the tongue like syrup while leaving a sweet after taste....delicious! Emile.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/10/2017 10:35:00 PM
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Thanks, Emile! I'm so glad you liked my very short (but descriptive) poem. :)
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John Michaels
Date: 4/9/2017 12:27:00 PM
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Oooh, very risque! Lovely write, Laura. Kudos for finding a suitable word to link back to "Lush" - I gave up and went for the Labyrinth instead :). Best of luck for the contest!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/9/2017 1:58:00 PM
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Thanks, John...I actually looked up synonyms for lush and saw "ripe"!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/9/2017 8:58:00 AM
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Otherwise known as a 40 year old virgin. Sorry couldn't resist. I rate a 7, well done.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/9/2017 9:42:00 AM
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Hahaaa, very clever, Richard :) Definitely another way to look at this!!!
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2017 2:15:00 PM
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ooohhh sexy lanterne Laura - good luck:-) hugs jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/8/2017 6:59:00 PM
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Thanks, Jan. :)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/7/2017 10:39:00 PM
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Excellent pen! Sexy 7 ;)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/7/2017 11:04:00 PM
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Thanks, Maureen :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/7/2017 8:51:00 PM
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Very nice!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/7/2017 11:04:00 PM
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Thanks, Kim. :)
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Poetprentice Dupins
Date: 4/7/2017 7:12:00 PM
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Ah yes, the temptation of a Georgia peach on a hot, sultry, summer night...:) Excellent lanterne!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/7/2017 7:52:00 PM
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Thanks! So true. :)

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