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Luscious Lilies

Delicate darlings
unfurl cerise-blushed petals
to receive Sol’s gift.

(C) John C Michaels, 2017

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Susan Ashley

February 11, 2018 at 9:09 PM

A gorgeous Haiku brought to lovely poetic life with your alluring imagery, John. Simply stunning! Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan

Paul Callus

January 15, 2018 at 3:17 PM

I love the image you have created here, John. At the moment we have white lilies growing in our garden, otherwise not many flowers around at this time of year. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 11, 2017 at 1:15 PM

- This gives me a beautiful picture, John - I really enjoy your haikus ... and I love to write haikus :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels

March 12, 2017 at 5:06 AM

Thanks so much for your kind comments. Fellow Hailku aficionados unite!

Lisa Ricci

February 25, 2017 at 9:10 AM

John I can see you are one of the experts that I told you about in my response to your review. You obviously have mastered this form in theme tone voice and count. Beautiful and an honor to see. Well done

John Michaels

February 26, 2017 at 9:52 AM

Wow, that's very kind of you. Thank you so much for the lovely feedback.